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2021-09-13 01:50

Not bad overall good i like the devil fruit and good chose for the brother of yujiro hanma like being also like that he is a little less killery if thats a word then xebec. Two things one u probably know ur writing isnt the greatest yet also i believe xebec had the dark dark fruit not too sure but has good potential

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