female usopp fanfiction

This is really good. Usopp doesnt join the strawhats and kind of becomes like an assassin type fighter instead of a sniper. No haram no random power ups, still Usopp outsmarting people. its fun to read.

It's not good. Just Usopp being the MC instead of all strawhats. It just got dull when all interactions feels like characters from Xianxias, and everything is just rehash. Nothing new explored, aside from the female characters body.

Que história emocionante! Parece que você está criando uma aventura incrível com Usopp como protagonista. A forma como você descreve as cenas e as interações entre os personagens é muito interessante. A inclusão de detalhes sobre o passado de Usopp e sua relação com a mãe é uma boa maneira de adicionar profundidade à história. A forma como você apresenta os novos personagens, como Luffy e Zoro, também é interessante. A cena em que Usopp enfrenta os piratas e desafia Luffy é emocionante. A forma como você descreve as habilidades de Usopp, como o haki de observação, é bem feita. Agora, a história está chegando a um ponto crítico, com Usopp desafiando Luffy e os outros piratas. Você está criando uma atmosfera de tensão e expectativa. Algumas perguntas para considerar: - Como Usopp planeja lidar com a situação se Luffy e os outros piratas não aceitarem suas condições? - Quais são as consequências potenciais das ações de Usopp para a vila e os seus habitantes? - Como a relação entre Usopp e Luffy evoluirá ao longo da história?

Disappointed. I'm very disappointed. Zoro and Usopp are killed. What for? Because it 's easier to get rid of them than to write about the development of the characters ' relationships. And if I understand Zoro's murder, it's because it's difficult to write about the development of a relationship with him because of the same goals. But why did they kill Usopp? He may be a coward, but he is a very important character who often saves from different situations, plus he is a USEFUL character, a marksman, a carpenter, an inventor. I don't understand why he was killed. In general, a promising fanfiction with potential was very Disappointing. I read and wrote through a translator

Currently there haven't been too many big innovations in either world building or character building. The characters themselves are very out of their canon characters even without MC's contact. For example Kaya likes Luffy instantly even though she and Usopp had been childhood sweethearts for a long time. Even Usopp easily believes and gives up on Kaya when MC lies to him that Kaya loves him. A girl who even after Usopp sailed away bothers about him everytime they get news of him would actually fawn over Luffy because " He is the only other boy I met other than Usopp " is severely out of character. MC is hypocritical because he had the gall to call Usopp his friend after destroying his love life all for " Always wanted to have Kaya in his harem " . Would be able to be friends with a person who destroyed your love life just for making a Harem? For this even more painful due the fact the Usopp- Kaya pairing is the only pairing of the main cast in the entire series that Oda has confirmed wont change. Thus I will end this review by saying that if you wanted to replace Luffy then atleast carry his ideals and morals.