naruto a jounin like kakashi fanfiction

Untill now it was more world building. I hope the action will start soon. He is in the same generation as Naruto right?(Hiruzen is Hokage,Kakashi is Jounin). If yes I Hope it will not be focused to much on the cannon(be in the Naruto team,help Naruto...) and put him in other team(Ino,Shikaru,Mc or maybe Guy,Tenten,Mc) but those are ideas in the end. Grammar is above averange. Good luck and hope it will not be dropped soon.

This whole story is created to disrespect Kakashi's character. This is not the same gigachad Kakashi aka I'm not afraid you even if you jounin aka arrogant edgelord. I can't believe no one noticed a change in Kakashi's behavior. This OC character which may be called as Hotoki Kawakasi. Read at your own risk.

There is a big problem with the age of the main character. Kakashi created the Chidori when he was 12 years old during the 3rd Great Ninja War. Considering that Kakashi at the beginning of the Naruto manga was 26 years old and the main character of this fanfiction is 18 it means that your character created the chidori at the age of four.

I read in FF.Net, but still ... Its's good reading, but need more dephthin characters, like he preaches about peace, relationships and stuff, but even knowing that Naruto and Sasuke could become strong to help him, still treat them as kids. The other Jounin, like Gai and Kakashi are strong, but never use neither of them too. its's more about a solitary Op character that try to look more than he is.6/10 overall

Meh, this isn't bad. However, both Naruto and Sasuke have been working hard for the past four years had less/equal amount of development as lee had in 1 year and several months. Naruto almost passed out from Zabuza's killing intent but was okay with Kuramas, who last time I checked is the strongest of the nine tail beasts. The training in the academy was fine, but the results were underwhelming. They should at least be able to defeat Kakashi without the Sharingan individually. Yes, Kakashi is a veteran, but he is a stagnated veteran. He barely improved from the 14 years old version of himself and highly depends on his Sharingan. Kakashi can't use the Chidori without it. Overall, the power scaling is BS. Here is how it should have been. Graduation: Naruto = Jonin Sasuke (Without Sharingan) = Low Jonin Sasuke (Sharingan) = Jonin Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = Elite Jounin Sakura = Low Genin Kakashi = Jonin Kakashi (With Sharingan) = Elite Jonin Post Wave Arc : Naruto = Elite Jonin Sasuke (Without Sharingan) = Jonin Sasuke (With Sharingan) = Elite Jonin Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = Low S-class Sakura = Low Chunin Time Skip 3-years: Naruto = S-class Naruto ( Chakra Mode) = Low SS-class Naruto (Kurama Mode) = High SS-class Sasuke = Low S-class Sasuke (Sharingan) = S-class Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = High S-class Sasuke (Mangekyo Sharingan) = High S-class Sasuke (Lightning Mangekyo Sharingan) = Low SS-class Sasuke (Perfect Susanoo) = SS class Sakura = Elite Jonin Kakashi = Elite Jonin Kakashi (With Sharingan) = Low S-class