inspiring first robot story

my first thought after reading the first chapter was " is this book versions of I, Robot?" but obviously it is not since i already read the book, 'I, Robot.' is this book as interesting? i will say, yes.

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the story is quite lacking, most of the plot is too forced like when his mother died and suddenly the ancient one is visiting so he can train his ability, the timeskip also didnt help as it feels reading a summary rather than a story then you suddenly add tony stark out of the blue, and just like with other conversations they speak like robot or badly written script from a 3rd rate author, pepper alrrady demanded that he speak with tony immediately, she should first ask if he's already fine first or if he needs any thing, your mc is a robot and everyone else is a robot

I figured having a soul would make the robot less robot like but its just a robot still. The MC is a girl boy in the realest sense. I find nothing interesting about the character which ruins the story as a whole.

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