gai trains naruto for chunin exams fanfiction

Good book although it is slow paced it was interesting, waiting for the start of Chunin exams , hope to see new story arc in naruto which is as interesting as naruto

Typical story where stuff always happens for the plot like Hinata creating a jutsu that needs perfect chakra control before the chunin exams because she trains with Naruto sometimes The romance is so forced that it's painful, with very little build-up, too early in the story, and very little reason why Naruto likes her just unneeded. The author adds things and acts like they change the plot but it's literally the exact same as cannon. And Naruto's charater is kinda like budget Gojo and hes Gojo's charater but in a very dull sense.

This is a slow and passionate story lived in the world of Naruto, but at least for now, forget Naruto, Sasuke, Zabuza, chunin exams, nothing like that, here we have an original story that surprises us in each chapter and makes us root for the MC. Good writing, great character development.

Very well written story so far about Naruto realistically gaining future memories during the chunin exams. Loving the relationships with everybody so far. And I especially love the fact that Naruto still feels like Naruto. Definitely hoping this continues and isn’t dropped.

First thing good job on the story you made Naruto OP but you follow the typical troop of the chunin exams. WQ: your writing is clear. SoP: updates are stable 👍 CD: WB: you could make better use of the Narutoverse eg. The flying technique from onhoki is a must have.