the real war horse story

For want of an apprentice, the blacksmith was lost. For want of a blacksmith, the shop was lost. For want of a shop, the hammer was lost. For want of hammer, the nail was lost. For want of a nail, the shoe was lost. For want of a shoe, the horse was lost. For want of a horse, the rider was lost. For want of a rider, the message was lost. For want of a message, the battle was lost. For want of a battle, the war was lost. For want of a war, the kingdom was lost, All for the want of an apprentice.

First of all thanks to author for the story. Your hard work is definitely appreciated. The story is good, a lot of sentimental values and moments. The blind abandoned horse is a very significant character brought in. I do hope this horse character develops well together with XY, a strong lovable girl who knows what is in real life, and therefore dare to make a change when the opportunity comes.

It is a bit strange, give girls a horse tail and horse ears and treat them like horses. Then let those girls behave like a horse, and you have a story. It is not flattering to be compared with a horse, but it is a male thing, I suppose.

The story is getting better and better with the upcoming war to show the idiotic primitives who are the real demons are!! Can't wait for the next few chapters for the great war?

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