celeb fanfic

Honestly, I'm not into this business building stories, though this one caught my attention, personally I liked celeb very much, hope you keep writing and improving your work...

Bro he should play final for win and india should create dynasty. Adding of celeb stuff is best. Don't make mc injury permanent. Adding system skill is better. Let him play ipl and create dynasty please.

Your ancestors fought year after year in the bitter jungle. For hundreds if not thousands of years they adapted and evolved, battling both disease and beast, and reigning triumphant! And for what? What was the ends of this survival? So their descendant could write a fanfic about some geeky minecraft player in an anime? How are you this much of a loser? You aren't even willing to write a self insert, but you write about an e-celeb.. dude.. do you have any self awareness at all? Do you even realize how much of a loser you look like?

A simple, funny, hilarious story with some unexpected twists. i liked how author narrated the story from texts. all the crazy friends gang and our willy boy,foodie celeb, mommy's boy liam,bossy Sophia ( soph) every character was unique and entertaining. Thank you for a hilarious story.

The first chapter is really interesting. The conversation between Audrey and Celeb appears comical on the surface, but it effectively accomplishes the basic worldbuilding, establishing systems like the Awakened Academy and explaining why she was recruiting a prisoner into it. Though I find the beginning a bit repetitive, and the prose is weird at parts. Though the problems are technical and fixable. The story itself is quite enjoyable.