howard and maria stark time travel fanfiction

Its overall good. But, it feels like a chinese fic. I mean, there is no face slapping or losing face which I am gratefull for. But there are some plot holes too. Just to make them see Main character seen as a competent person, he rescued Howard stark from things which no other normal human could do. Howard stark would've died if he didnt interfere. I mean, In his second save, he idenifies poison in the beverage they bring to them in howard's office. how does he knows what poison smells like? And if Howard was going to die, Who was going to save him in the first place?

F**king perfect! I see Howard set up a spy organization to locate and help the mutants, like the SHIELD but who does not hate mutants but rather protects them from government and organizations like SHIELD where Hydra, imagine that the SHIELD who thinks he is better passes his life without the knowledge of the mutants. And maybe change the name of mutants too because it looks like cancer. And Howard could find the tesseract before Howard Stark and keep it for him

I'm loving this fic so far. I hope that you don't make Howard Stark die and try to make him become closer to his family. Also, who is gonna be the mc's love interest? I hope it is Natasha.

I'm just not going to continue because of the videos that the protagonist sends to Tony Stark of him with Maria, that really bothers me and leaves a smell of NTR. (it's very strange to me, but the work was interesting until then)

I give this a good review. Flow of the writing is disjunctive or jarring to read as there are certain terms in the present would not be condoned in the past. For example, when King had to stop Peggy Carter and Steve Rogers from kissing as he and Howard Stark watched, King slapped Steve Rogers in the neck while saying, “I like your Cut G.” The plot feels forced as more and more chapters go on even if this is a slice of life. There are inconsistencies in the novel as one of the sentences is of Howard piloting a helicopter in the 1940s as author left out any explanation of how there was a helicopter that was made way before its time. Honestly, idk if you should read this because I dont see the need to.