warriors the new prophicy novel
Su Mo went from the pride of his clan to becoming the butt end of a joke in a matter of minutes. The former King of Mercenaries from Earth was reborn in the body of a boy in a foreign world and had used skills in his previous life to rise to the top among his peers, however, his previous training could only take him so far. The next step in this martial arts dominated world was to awaken one’s Martial Soul. The awakening ceremony ends in disaster for Su Mo as he awoke a Martial Soul of the lowest level. Such a prodigy is now considered worse than useless as his Martial Soul is far too weak! After becoming the embarrassment of the clan, he discovers that his Martial Soul has a unique property: it could level up! This unique martial soul could shake the heavens. It was at this time that Su Mo meets the love of his life but the situation quickly deteriorates when she is taken by one of the most powerful forces in the world. Su Mo must rise from the lowest of the low and reach the pinnacle of power in order to save the love of his live within five years or she will forever be out of his reach.
My review for your story is 5 stars. It deserves it; you portray the characters well, and their reactions and interactions seem natural and logical. But I have a question: later in the story, Gerhard delves into biogenetics. Why would he be interested in having Gerhard create his own warriors? Furthermore, I'll give you a name: the Neos Warriors. They were much stronger than a Primaris Space Marine, but not as strong as a Custodian. To put it simply, half as strong as a Custodian. Recruitment targets: men and women between the ages of 18 and 40. This was made possible because Gerhard asked Lencillus to let him analyze it. The purpose of these warriors is to create a new generation of warriors stronger than a Primaris Space Marine. And yes, a reference: when the emperor created the true warriors, but knowing Gerhard, these warriors will be completely viable and won't end up like the thunder warriors.