naruto kyuubi child fanfic

Really not sure how this story has such a high rating. It is honestly a perfect showcase of everything wrong with the novels written on this website. I understand that folks cannot find good fanfiction. Have you all tried spacebattles or fanfic dot net? Even Archive of our own has some good stuff. Just this is not one of them. Perhaps read that Kyuubi fanfic that is on here in which someone is reincarnated as Kyuubi no Kitsune from Naruto and starts off imprisoned in Kushina. That one is well written.

"It's a boy Kushina" Nurse 1 "And it's healthy" Nurse 2 "Thank God it's Ok" Minato Namikaze "Can i see him" Kushina Uzumaki "Yes" Nurse 1 "His name is gonna be Naruto" Minato og Kushina You know what happens, Kyuubi gets out and gets controlled by an Uchiha, destroys some of the village, Minato and Kushina dies to protect Naruto aka Black Death, Hiruzen becomes Hokage again and so on. About a year after the kyuubi attack it's more impressive to is it op front than in the manga and anime - Naruto "Rrrrrr" Kyuubi "Yo kid what are you doing here?" Kyuubi "no mucth" Naruto when he came back he had long noticed both the ANBU and ROOT agents. More interraction with the Kyuubi happen later down the line but it's pretty much the same. A hidden underground complex by Konoha "Do you have the bodies" unknown voice 1 (What a trash, do you want us to read this?)

dumb bad grammar mc is transmigrated as mizuki he tricks Naruto into stealing the forbidden scroll and tells Naruto he's a jinchuriki who holds kyuubi and gets a slap on the wrist after everything is found out

Okay, well, for those who want to read it, I'm warning you, the book is very poorly translated. Sometimes Naruto says "nine-tailed fox," and the next line you have Kyuubi saying he's not an old man. There's one chapter where they say it's been four years since Kyuubi's massacre, and another chapter where they say Naruto is twelve years old. Sometimes the fox demon is named Xiaohu.

The biggest flaw in the story is the author lingering too long on the child arc. I know that the foundations of childhood power are important, and everyone reading this fanfic has already read a million Naruto fanfics with a child arc. I love Naruto fanfics and recommend this one, but please speed up the story.