fiction first missing person detective story

The story started quite slow but then develops into an thrilling and suspenseful first POV detective fiction. The description of the characters are also pretty specific. If the author put some more works on their grammars and dialogues, this will definitely be a better story. Looking forward to the System part of the novel.

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cons: 1. it's a harem later into the story, but there are no tags for it. 2. translation is not that good, like constantly calling mc "Hamilton detective" instead of detective Hamilton, or Mc's pet is always called "cat Mia" instead of Mia the cat or just Mia for short. then there is some confusion with gender pronouns and first/3rd person povs. 3. pacing issues in some instances other than these, the story is pretty good at least in the 400 chapters that I've read, just not at lotm level despite being heavily inspired by it.

Trach and waste of time for these resons: 1- stupied MC and characters 2- the story is going too fast 3- bad fights end in two seconds 4- all the fouce on the MC And the list goes on insted of reading this trach I recommend to read these fan fiction novels: 1- HP magical journey (HARRY POTTER) 9.5/10 MUST READ!! 2- famous police detective in detective world (CONAN) 9/10 3-