colored out the line fanfic

The beginning may be a little off-putting, but you should read up to 10-15 chapters, This fanfic has a lot of things that other fanfics don't have: Realism, Darkness, Logic and much more. If you want to read a realistic fanfic about the cruel world of shinobi without rose-colored glasses then this fanfic is for you.

“Chapter 76 76.THE SEASON OF THE RED LEAVES     The mountain nearby the royal capital were completely colored in red.   The mountains that used to be shining in green was now colored in the red color, giving” Excerpt from Katahane no Riku, Chapter 1 - Chapter 100 Teramachi Akeho This material may be protected by copyright.

Well, this is much better than I expected. It's a shame it's not an ASOIAF fanfic, but you're doing quite well. I would like to point out that all Valyrian dragons are genetically the same, so there isn't a race of silver dragons, they are silver colored Valyrian dragons and already, the Targaryen themselves have had silver colored dragons before. So it doesn't make sense that they have a low birth rate, unless in your story this family was bent on crossing silver colored dragons. You literally escaped to the side of your biggest enemies xD, Bravos, if I were them I would attack the MC now that he has only 2 dragons. As for the faceless assassins, I wouldn't worry about that, if they were cheap they would have sent them after the Targaryen heads. There is mention of obsidian in Skagos, so there may be volcanic activity, you could use that place to settle the dragons. One question, how many Valyrians did you take with you? Men and women. You need at least a couple of thousand to fill the Island with their race.

This story over all is amazing I think whoever reads it will absolutely love it. This story in my opinion it very marvelous because the way the pictures are colored perfectly . The scenery is spectacular. The characters are drawn and colored perfectly Everything in the story is breathtaking I love how each character has a very unique personality and not looking a like

It's the prologue and things are quite intense already. I don't really get what's things supposed to be or what action is partaking on some scene, like my brain got lost when people speedrun about their life's accomplishes. If the world's that red colored, i wonder what it'd look like if someone decided to pick their pen? Characters background's a little too much ambiguous, but there's room for having some spill out a little far down the line so if written comprehensively, it might make them more believable.