It's the prologue and things are quite intense already. I don't really get what's things supposed to be or what action is partaking on some scene, like my brain got lost when people speedrun about their life's accomplishes. If the world's that red colored, i wonder what it'd look like if someone decided to pick their pen? Characters background's a little too much ambiguous, but there's room for having some spill out a little far down the line so if written comprehensively, it might make them more believable.
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Thank you for reading. This is my first web novel, so it's a little wonky in some areas. I'm confused by the question about the pen though, lol.
Ah, pardon. By that it's about the possibilities IF Mangaka or Drawers decides to pick their 'Pen' and make some artwork inspired by these in general and with the settings and atmosphere you're having Just in the Prologue, it might make for a Bloodborne-esque vibe novel, and i'm All down for it.
Alr alr. I’l have to consider how the moon would affect world building. I’d always considered how the politics affected the world, but hadn’t gotten to the point of considering the moon. I’l take note of this.
