After hugging someone's thigh, I went crazy in the survival variety show
[Shuang Jie, 1v1, Redemption, Giant Pet]
Yun Xianghuan, the pitiful little girl who had been disfigured by the fate of being taken away by the book and the daughter.
In order to defy the heavens and change his fate, he had staked everything on participating in a wilderness live broadcast variety show with the lowest survival rate in the world.
She had thin arms and legs, and her chin was thin. One look and one could tell that she was malnourished and weak. Everyone unanimously thought that Yun Xianghuan was a cannon fodder who had eaten a box lunch on the first day.
Even Yun Xianghuan felt the same way.
However…banana leaves, bamboos, hatchets, fat fish…When these urgently needed supplies suddenly appeared in front of Yun Xianghuan, the atmosphere gradually became strange.
Yun Xianghuan was speechless. Could it be that she had magic that could grant her wishes?
Until one day, Yun Xianghuan suddenly bumped into a big black panther with wings, carefully placing a bunch of grapes in front of her house…
Yun Xianghuan was speechless. Ah…Help! She…she seemed to be pampered by the Beast Deity!
As time passed, Yun Xianghuan developed a strong affection for the big black panther.
Yun Xianghuan pinched the little meat on her stomach and looked at her fair and chubby self. Not only was she not happy, but she was also crying her heart out.
This was because the Leopard Lord's gaze on her had become more and more strange recently…
As expected, she knew that the big black panther would not treat her well for no reason. It must have treated her as storage food. Now that she was well, she would definitely be eaten.
Yun Xianghuan gritted her teeth and reached out her hand." You…you can eat me now!" Wuwuwu…"
When a certain leopard heard this, he immediately transformed into a living person. He pulled his tie and approached. His eyes were filled with smiles.
"QAQ!"
Note: This article is also known as "Shocking!" After Rebirth, I Was Spoiled by the Beast Deity,"" After Rebirth, I Changed to Take Beauty and Force My Miserable Redemption Script,"" Man vs. Wild: Leopard Lord, Don't Bite Me "
I have read through few chapters... The story reads well, and you can totally get what the author is trying to convey. That being said ... it reads like just a step above MTL with no grammatical mistakes... This could be inexperience .. or just plain inexperienced sense of language.. or more like some one learnt English as second language, then, they learned their flair of language from writers who have English as second language... the words are right, the description is correct ... yet, some thing is lacking ... well, one can clearly say it lacks flair, but that only ever comes with experience & studying .. I suggest you read few old English novels - like Jane Austens.. if nothing else, you can see the difference.. then, rest comes just from experience. All the same, give it a try . it's a good enough read.