Electromagnetic science from pirates
This was the story of a transmigrator named Mo Fei who had become a spy of the Don Quijote Family from the Pirate World. He used electricity to treat himself, treat the entire family, and teach them the Five Lectures, Four Beauties, Harmony, and Freedom. Then, he treated the wireless multiverse of multiple parallel worlds.
A few years later, Mo Fei began to take on high-end businesses.
[Specializing in the maintenance of various unstable phenomena in the electromagnetic field of the universe, treating pulsar hyperactivity, and solving the continuous paralysis of electromagnetic stars.
Waxing the white hole, polishing the black hole, and stabilizing the wormhole.
He would collect second-hand white, black, red, yellow, and blue dwarf stars. He would sell them in large quantities at a good price, and he could even exchange them for stainless steel washbasins.
The gamma-ray burst would regularly clean up all kinds of evil gods, save the world's sanity value, and solve all kinds of hidden dangers that could destroy the world. It would not cost money if it was not cleaned up!
You can try it first before you buy it. Contact Hotline: XXXXX.]
[Temporarily set: One Piece, Ghost Extinguisher, Naruto, Super Electromagnetic Cannon…]
First off the grammar is pretty good, there werent any mistakes that i really noticed on that front. i like the dynamic of the relationship between Coraline and Irene. how Coraline did something really f***ed up and that she has to keep up that secret to maintain their relationship. Theres a lot that can be done with that. I like how Coraline is protrayed as a calculating woman, and the fact that she finds rumours about her unpleasant is very human. some novels just have the characters not talk about it, or theyre portrayed as not caring which i just cant wrap my head around. The characters actually seem real with their baggage and personalities, another thing that is usually difficult for other authors. all in all i think this could be a very intriguing read for someone into this sort of novel.