The real daughter has made the cultivation world crazy
In order to turn the tide in the other world, Lan Zhi was proficient in alchemy, talismans, and arrays. He was familiar with technology and intelligence. He could write in the north and shock ghosts and gods with his sword.
Once she returned home, she was still a pitiful little girl with a star vein that had been whipped. The fake daughter who had taken over the magpie's nest could easily decide her life and death.
Lan Zhi sneered and jumped off the cliff in front of everyone.
If a cripple's body can't handle it, find a Star Academy to hide in.
However, the Star Academy was too down and out. She had to spend some effort to help the Star Academy regain its glory after advancing three levels in a row. For example, she had to set a small goal that she could achieve first:
He would earn 10 billion first.
For this reason, she created an instant messaging tool that was universal in the cultivation world, created an online trading platform that spread throughout the cultivation world, broke the monopoly of aristocratic families 'resources, realized the automatic production of pills, tools, and array talismans, and killed all the filthy beasts that attacked at night with a sword...
He also became the richest man in the cultivation world.
Everyone scrambled to learn from Lan Zhi.
"I'm just familiar with it." Lan Zhi smiled humbly.
His words caused the entire cultivation world to go crazy.
The fake daughter who thought that she had gotten rid of Lan Zhi turned around and realized that she had lost everything unknowingly. She was both panicked and helpless." Where is the thing that belongs to me?"
"I'm sorry, they were all eliminated," Lan Zhiyun said casually.
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Lan Zhi was not lacking in wisdom, strategy, and tactics, but he lacked a little warmth.
At some point, the Star Spirit God of All Things had quietly arrived by her side and pulled her into his embrace.
Feng Chongxiao
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First off the grammar is pretty good, there werent any mistakes that i really noticed on that front. i like the dynamic of the relationship between Coraline and Irene. how Coraline did something really f***ed up and that she has to keep up that secret to maintain their relationship. Theres a lot that can be done with that. I like how Coraline is protrayed as a calculating woman, and the fact that she finds rumours about her unpleasant is very human. some novels just have the characters not talk about it, or theyre portrayed as not caring which i just cant wrap my head around. The characters actually seem real with their baggage and personalities, another thing that is usually difficult for other authors. all in all i think this could be a very intriguing read for someone into this sort of novel.