first fisting story

Dropped when MC started stabbing then fisting a girl like some psychopath. The grammar is subpar, dialogue is slightly better, writing is quite undeveloped. Pet peeve of cannon/canon sealed the deal.

Characters are all bland and have no distinguishing characteristics. Everyone is arrogant and gets upset over the smallest things. Mc always wins. Every battle is a shouting match of moves "Three Finger Fisting!" and they all come down to one character's Cultivation level+Skill Level + Skill comprehension vs. the others. No strategy or cleverness. Each are basically the same. Plot is just mc learning skills over and over and leveling up and fighting people that are pissed at him for no reason. Barely anything happens plot wise at least in the first 88 chapters. Very bad novel, reading it makes me feel like a bad person.

This is great story for your first novel. This is great story for your first novel. This is great story for your first novel. This is great story for your first novel. This is great story for your first novel. This is great story for your first novel. This is great story for your first novel. This is great story for your first novel.

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Great story and premise. But something I’ve notice that I find a bit jarring is how some chapters feel like filler or extra padding to increase word count. Like Virus or the author starts to explain a concept, (like cultivation stages) and he explains it in such a unnecessarily long way. I can understand the need to lay down the frame for future events and foreshadowing but there’s a difference between introducing a concept and hand fisting it down a readers mouth. Like an example is when virus explains cultivation stages the author wastes paragraphs on how in the future world they have different names and how “the simple matter of this 'Internal Energy Spark' was what separated a normal human from a beginner cultivator. Because the moment a human being gained an awareness toward Internal Energy, would be the moment he enters the first level of Energy Disentanglement stage.” That sounds so convoluted and makes the chapter feel like filler. Not to mention it makes it feel like the author thinks the reader isn’t smart enough to get the obvious that this stage marks the beginning. And it isn’t just in this part, in a majority of the times the characters or the author tries to explain something it’s done in this convoluted spoon-fed as if it was written for people with reduced chromosomes. I just think the author needs to cut down on the filler in his explanations and realize that readers can be smart enough to understand the obvious implications. Now it may sound like I am hating on the story but i actually like the story and the characters. I just find it annoying when I’m reading and have to scroll mindlessly through half the chapter to avoid all the obvious filler and padding and get to the actually interesting parts.