equestria girls fanfic

the ideas proposed by the author were good and well executed... It's a pity that the update is not constant, but whenever a new chapter comes out I'll be there to read... I sincerely look forward to the Equestria Girls Arc

You know, I never understood those HIE fics where the MC just accepts being a base human in Equestria.It doesn't make sense, not at all, I mean personally if I got to Equestria I'd do everything in my power to obtain magic, get stronger.Because really, if there's a being powerful enough to move the sun I won't feel comfortable unless I have a way of either stopping it or running away to another dimension.

I like your fanfic, and I think this is good fanfic but your character and the girls still lack personality also the story is too fast and loses its feel. You have to give the girls each time alone with the MC[lack of bonding time]

it's good fanfic but the mc is a simp and pathetic can't stand up to girls

If i was to have a criticism for this fanfic it would be that the MC goes through girls like a hot knife through butter, Having read the original storyline for this fanfic even i still struggle keeping track of the girls given the MCs penchant for flitting all over the place outside of the original timeline.