mal and evie turned into four years old fanfiction

There is a big problem with the age of the main character. Kakashi created the Chidori when he was 12 years old during the 3rd Great Ninja War. Considering that Kakashi at the beginning of the Naruto manga was 26 years old and the main character of this fanfiction is 18 it means that your character created the chidori at the age of four.

usually in fanfiction, the first ring is already over 1000 years old, but here it is the yellow centennial. Pathetic. .............. ... .. .....

I just can't deal with this story any longer. I read around 100 chapters and I'm pretty sure I have been reminded of the MC's age, that he's four years old, at least 593 times. no joke, one chapter repeated the words "four years old" over 30 times. This story consists of the MC doing something, followed by 15 chapters of glazing him and reacting over his age. It's a shame because the idea of the story is great, just poorly executed.

Only for teens 10-14 years old. Only for teens 10-14 years old. Only for teens 10-14 years old. Only for teens 10-14 years old. Only for teens 10-14 years old. Only for teens 10-14 years old. Only for teens 10-14 years old. Only for teens 10-14 years old. Only for teens 10-14 years old. Only for teens 10-14 years old. Only for teens 10-14 years old. Only for teens 10-14 years old. Only for teens 10-14 years old.

It seems orginal author's knowledge of lotm and love craften came from other half baked chinese fanfiction and superficial wiki search because from what I see the whole plot is MC bullying and outsmart the outer gods and great old ones but the thing is MC only have IQ of a 12 years old and outer gods worst barely 10 years old , not to mention the other characters.