bardock and gine fanfic

Awesome story I like how our mc's more aware and has to start off as a baby and that he didn't take the Bardock movie route and it appears that Bardock actually cares for Raditz, Gine, and Kakarot.

Awesome story love the OC Can’t wait for bardock I wonder if she will have the ability of the Namekuseijins to make dragon ball or others And I absolutely love gine

the story and the writing quality is good .but..after he became ang angel i feel like something change that made it boring specially about how he handle his relationship with the women who loved him and how he meddle with the relationship of bardock and gine.Like he was playing with other peoples lives.Im disappointed... it's like where a mortal given an overwhelming power and slowly bu surely lost themselves.

The biggest problem I have is why the f*** is he not letting gine meet female kakarot. why is being such a sissy: and for what stability of plot. if you care about plot then why did you write an alternate universe in which every Main character is female and MC saves his mother and gine when everything is so f***** up why does he care work plot

A great idea for a novel. That's all it has though. First grammar is bad well not that bad but still bad. Sentences Don't make sense sometime. Nerf many people an MC. Then summoning the worst characters that anyone would summon. What I mean by worst is weak, unskilled, useless character compared to the dozens of other characters MC could of chosen. For example MC gets to chose a character from DBZ an chose's Bardock? now I have nothing against bardock but there are so many better than him that actually know martial arts an many other stuff while being more powerful. Not only that you actually nerf an already weak Bardock!!! I won't read this now.