Longevity begins with a servant
Li Mo had transmigrated to another world and finally found this place…
The Daoists occupied the Immortal Abode, and the Saints and Buddhas built the Indestructible Heaven.
Demons ran rampant in the country, and it was not a rumor that ghosts destroyed the world.
The true body of the Martial Immortal suppressed the hundred regions, and the sea demons surged into the sky.
Plant monsters ran on the ground, who was a great medicine?
True immortals were ethereal, and all living beings were fighting to cross over.
Li Mo cultivated step by step and finally became an immortal, forever staying in the world.
(This book will not ascend to the immortal cultivation world, nor will it follow the traditional practice of Qi, Foundation Establishment, and Jindan.
After putting on the shelf, I gradually entered a good state. Please enjoy it.
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I'm not a piece of wood
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It's not bad, but it's a little unrealistic, of course reading a fanfic it is pretty decent, but the attitudes of the characters, and the reactions if a little off. I just think that Zack feels off in chapter 6, (or chapter 3 the final part). In that chapter Zack agrees to a bet so the mc can get him to join forces and stop the bullying. Zack agreeing when getting so out played is a little unrealistic and I think that Zack would have just ignored "Daniel" when he offered to made the bet. I think Zack would have disagreed to the bet or just not upheld it. I think he would have stormed off or continued to attack "Daniel". But hey maybe like most fanfics this isn't going off of the actual story attitude of characters and the made up fanfic version of the story. I'm not saying it's a bad story, I'm just saying it's to unrealistic for me to read.