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I really like the concept of the story. But I really hate the plot armor regarding the hypnosis thing. If all of his problem can be solve because of hypnosis the story will be boring. I really suggest the author read the "Release that witch" novel to get some ideas on how to make a proper empire building story. Also, because of the hypnosis the other characters don't have personality, they are just like puppets. And this is a big thing, because all good story contains character that have personality. Characters, not just the protagonist, that have growth development.
This novel has different story from other hypnosis stories.Every character have their own personalities,and the victim off the hypnosis did not become mindless and still can think by their own.the system also is interesting,not just a machine that help the host.Also,when will Tenshi train martial arts ? Note:This is my first ever review,sorry if there anything wrong with it.English is not my native languange,sorry if there are some problems.
Loved this novel. The calculating protagonist brings chill to me by destroying original protagonist team, but it has its own taste for the readers. I, personally love fanfiction, especially one piece one but the harem and erotic scenes gave the wings to this masterpiece. As i am student i can't support this with points, etc but my power stones are for you. Please just bring the new chapters??
This Fanfiction is one of the best fanfiction I have ever read so far, the story development is great, the plot is awesome, the characters development is great and finally the lemon scenes are erotic as it can be.