black mask batman story

The story tells the tale of Baneman, the unholy offspring of Batman and Bane. Known to most as the masked knight, Baneman forces friends and foes to ask "Who's Baneman?! Why does he wear the mask?!" To which the reply is of course: "For you."

I love what you are doing. The development of the various identities to mask the use of various powers is a smart move, very hard to manage, but thats what Selene is for. Wondering if there will be more of just Batman and Superman?

So far I am a few chapters in. this batman for a second seemed like batman. in a few chapters, however, I get a sense that his actions does not seem like a batman/ Bruse Wayne. Hell, even the entry of 'Miss' Black Cat is completely of character. the thing about good Fanfics, to me, is not to make my 'favorite' character fuck each other (not saying this has happened yet here) but rather to put my OC into an already established world with established character and having them interact. You can change events but if you are going to put batman into a world and in the skin of Spiderman .than you need to understand batman, the character needs to act like batman and do and think like batman. so far, he did want to learn about the world and established himself for money. kind of a stretch but if you think batman's power is money then sure. whatever. However to go out and robe gang members for money and do non-hero shit for it. then this is not batman. also read absolute batman. his main superpower, his money, does not exist there.

The storylines is so messy in batman arc, so many incorrect names such as Kopolt,Steven Strange,Sherer, In marvel arc the ancient one become Mage king, Supreme Magician.Damn are we in black clover, Clearly the author didn't even research about batman series. And translator did not even bother fixing every mistake in some chapters.

To the Author, 1. Writing quality is to the level of undrestand but not to the good/best quality, 2. Updates- atleast 1 or 2 chapters per week, 3. Story development is good but make it little bit instense training for MC. 4. Make MC and Anti-Hero who does Justice and kill the wrong-doers, Make his outfit/Suit full black without Mask or With Mask with lots of defensive fuinjustsu on it's suit, Make MC the Master of all things - Survival Technique, Sealing, Fuinjustsu , Martial Arts( Combat , Sword, Staff and all other weapons, Chi, Ki, Chakra, Nature Energy and Yin/Yang Energy, etc.,), all Ninjutsu(also creates his unique jutsus which can be leard by any one but is very hard including his Sage Mode)All Sage Modes- Combining it into one unique Sage Mode to Make it permanent to his body only with Tattos no other like becoming otsusuki but Making him to grow with unlimited potential. Make the MC have his GF/Wife to have both Biyakugan and Sharingan together.( and No Harem please) 4. World Background - Make it Light hearted as Well as Dark sides too. Make The MC have his own group in ANBU/Normal Ninja as It named Rudra( who finish the evil by eradicating it completely to it's roots) with out mask and sometimes mask(for special missions- Simple black human mask with numbers) but ALL BLACK with lots of invisible fuinjustsu on it cloth making it very defensive. Thanks! Yours truly- Reader-Kun.