My Marvel Reincarnation.

I don't think I've ever been so excited for a fanfiction after only two chapters. This is going to be great the MC must have the 5 best original wishes that I've ever come across. MCs personality is great. tThe prologue was superb! 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

I read up to two chapters before stopping. This story is just...BAD. The MC's last wish is to make it were karma is super duper important to the point where if anyone does something that hurts someone else they get punished by karma. I'm not saying this is a bad thing in the real world, but it makes a story boring when the entire world no matter what will always have a happy ending and if you do good good things happen? Nah bruh, that ain't how life works sometimes life chews you and spits you out this is pretty much a crak fic about ultra powerful guy in a world were 9nly good things can happen. I hope I didn't off to much of a as$, but just wanted to give an honest opinion.

The MC has personality disorder ... At first, I thought he was going to be the MC who cares about the family, after all, he made a wish about it, right? But in some chapters there is almost no interaction with the family, they are just backgrounds for a rich family that is not even that powerful. Does Flash threaten the MC even though he knows about his family? It doesn't make sense, he may be an idiot, but he is not stupid. Another thing that annoys me is Felicia being made like a seductive bitch. She is not like that, he is just like that with people close to him, or when she is Black Cat. Seeing the MC being Peter's beta is another irritating thing too. One thing I notice, is that the Author takes an element of the story and does not build it, he just adds it. Example: Why did you add the family if you don't build the MC's relationship with them? For anyone reading this, just turn off the brain and read through the Hobby.

Im so glad that u did noT Cancel it

After reading the latest chapter (Chapter 16 as of posting this review), I've come to realise that this story has basically went downhill and I just can't help but to myself from reading this story as it's gotten to the point of complete bullshit to me. I feel that abandoning this story is the best choice for me but unlike those asshole reviewers who just say "THIS STORY IS SHIT" and run-off I will try my best to give my justifications. the Good: 1. The word count for each chapter is pretty good and the updates were somewhat frequent and that to me is a plus 2. The batman persona, despite the cringey stuff (like "you have failed this city" was copied from Arrow and also cringey, even if it is a cool line) was actually a good thing. You did shit with him and even killed off some ****ed characters so all was good with this one. But now we get to- The Bad: 1. The emancipation stuff kinda threw me off. usually stuff like that emancipation is like if you're in a abusive family. In this case his family loves him and it you're only doing it just so to beat bad guys and distance yourself from that. I just feel so confused with this one. The familial loves seems to only be one-sided with this one. Keeping a secret life from the parents tends to lead to some bad stuff as well (if peter parker's life has anything to say). 2. Side characters in this story are barely developed and don't even have any screen-time. I don't know if you've noticed but your current character is only talking with an AI and not anybody else. Aside from maybe peter he doesn't talk to anybody and he pretty much abandoned MJ and Felicia and stuff like that instead of actually maintaining contact. this was just sad honestly. The whole-loner mc thing kinda falls apart after a while you know. 3. The whole Superman persona imo absolutely unnecessary and completely forced. There was no need to go the whole superman route and throughout reading this story any and all reasons you have given me did not seem even remotely satisfying. 4. And now, the BIGGEST offender as to why I can't deal with this story, the MC's abilities. Do you know that there's a thing called a "Limit". I didn't have an issue when you got spider powers. Or when you obtained the mutant powers. Or when you obtained both the Hulk and Juggernaut's powers (at this point you should've just stopped cuz you were already powerful as is). But then you got the speedforce and to me at that point was when you should've stopped. But then you wanted to get greedy and copied thors, the other Asgardians and the finally FUCKING ODIN. That was honestly a step too far. First off it should've been impossible for you to obtain the odinforce cuz it ain't as cookie cutter as the any of the other superpowers and frankly should've been impossible. It's the kind of power capable of contending with some the strongest cosmic beings in the universe if not the multiverse heck. And if this universe closely resembled that of the comics then frankly there should've been no way for you to have survived that interaction with odin cuz when it comes to odin he's basically stone-cold. Something like the thing you just did would be more than enuf for him to completely annihilate without a second thought. Frankly that interaction with Odin was more than enough for me to call out "FUCKING BULLSHIT" and rightfully so. The story just kind of went purely downhill and I can't help but describe this story as nothing more than "Well-Written Shit"

Nicely done, I'm looking forward for the upcoming chapters =). Anyway good luck. ---K.

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This is good. Too bad, I really don't like how you handled the romance. It was kinda.. meh. Was there even a romance? But overall, still pretty good.

(English isn't my first language!) It's a really good story! The first few chapters are a little bad, but the last few chapters (14th at the moment) seems to be written by someone completely different! The quality goes up too much! Well, if you like Ruthless Heroes, the like that would kill every single rapist, killer and supervillain (the bad ones) out there, this story is for you! Other than this, the protagonist utilizes magic, technology and a lot of skills, it's really interesting to see! This Marvel world has the X-Men and all, it's really interesting. As every other story out there, there's obviously some things that people could end up disliking it... Some people here commented about the karma wish... You can simply ignore it! This wish affects only his past world, there's basically no significance to the story. Other than this, some people can end up disliking the fact that the author utilizes some DC Heroes name as the MC Hero name in a MCU story, but it simply a name, nothing more! Well, give this story a chance 'till at least the 11th chapter!

A good start. Get well soon and keep the chapters coming. I loved this from the very first chapter and I sincerely hope that you do not abandon this project. Good luck🥳

Great chapter as always. Story is becoming interesting now. Cant wait to read more. Great chapter as always. Story is becoming interesting now. Cant wait to read more.

Big fan of marvel fanfics. Like what you've done, don't know the mc too much to decide if he was too brutal but the explanation fow why in this case was good. I'm assuming that the dark knight persona is going for an anti-hero venom like persona.

dude can you change MC POV to narrator POV? very strange to read. That's in my opinion, because it's very strange to use MC POV, the impression is very boring. The narrator's POV is better and also, we as readers can better explore the contents of this novel. because with narrator's POV you don't need to focus on MC. in the marvel world, there are many characters that you have to bring in your novel. for example, give a conversation in the perspective of another character. If you are a good reader who has read or is reading WUXIA novels or something else, surely you will understand. because if this novel continues to focus on MC. would be very boring

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please please realease more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........................................................................................................

You always do such an amazing job. The only thing I would like to see more of in the future, would be continued character growth for your MC. Keep up the great work!

BRO when can you post a new chapter????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????