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HolyfireLv66yr
2018-10-29 02:35

It's about a fat MC that ogles at females and can't keep his hands to himself. He apparently saves some girl in the freaking 2nd chapter. So much for plot development.

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MoonfrostLv5

its good thatnot all mc are handsomem like gems xD no one is perfect so a funnny fat (choji) Mc is great too ^^

D_OsmanLv10

Dafuq don't think choji had issues with keeping his hands to himself

Moonfrost:its good thatnot all mc are handsomem like gems xD no one is perfect so a funnny fat (choji) Mc is great too ^^
HolyfireLv6

moonfrost is talking about the x-rated one

D_Osman:Dafuq don't think choji had issues with keeping his hands to himself
nirvLv10

Yeah! Fat is justice! lol

Moonfrost:its good thatnot all mc are handsomem like gems xD no one is perfect so a funnny fat (choji) Mc is great too ^^
samchon25Lv10

Srly? Fat? Hahaha, this is the first story i found about male lead being a fat

EmpyerianLv6

Xp

Nancy_KrillLv2

why do all fat mc's have to oggle at woman... this **** is getting tiring

FruittellaLv5

uhh, maybe bc they need some workouts? LOL

Nancy_Krill:why do all fat mc's have to oggle at woman... this **** is getting tiring
ArtistaFeelLv4

Wanna try something different? Try this! "Lyricist: Her Revenge" I'm sure you'll love it.

Wang_YongLv3

I read like some manga or novel idrk where i imagine like a fat mc like his eyes are always closed right when when he opens it the enemy suddenly feels the aoura of death looming over them

Wang_YongLv3

Basically what I'm saying is his body is fat but hold so much power that his stare alone makes them faint ahem ahem what I'm basically saying again that he is one of them hidden dragons a fat one at that

DMu7434680Lv15

I agree to most of what this is I also think he goes after too many girls...

teachhhhLv4

That's a story i would read, mc telling villians.. huh why do you seek death then lifts his swollen eyelids releasing a huge aura

Wang_Yong:I read like some manga or novel idrk where i imagine like a fat mc like his eyes are always closed right when when he opens it the enemy suddenly feels the aoura of death looming over them
smakdeeLv4

Author, Please when are u going to continue?

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SusreLv5

S. Capo´s Review (novelupdates) This novel is discontinued or hiatus. Great at first, then it became more and more nonsensical. I love harems, this novel mainly focused on it. The problem is he has this bs way of dealing with girls, plus the author just sends girls here and there (either kidnapped or forced to marry someone or just pure bs going somewhere, just like fades on the background) just so that he can focus on one girl at a time. Cultivation part is a bit confusing (cause his cultivation level is called differently from earth cause he came from a different world) but it is still ok at first then it also became nonsense in the end, cause of all the OPness and stuff. I get it, that the MC is OP and he can beat the crap out of anyone higher level than him but it keeps on repeating that over and over and over it became boring. Plus there is this plot armor which for some reason he cannot use at will (the author seems to refuse that it is a plot armor so he does this) but come on, it became really annoying. The author tried to put different personalities to the girls but he forgot all about it later on until all the girls are the same where you cannot identify which is which cause they all act the same way (childish, jealous, sweet, gentle) good personalities but if a 28 years old and an 18 years old acted the same way in the same setting, it gets weird but bearable since I know it is hard to write a novel so I still appreciate the efforts, still I dont know why it is discontinued, possibly lost support but a good read if you just wanna find something to do when you're bored, but dont expect anything out of it, purely about harem, MC showing off how OP he is, MC beating the crap out of normal people. (MC actually fought more normal people than cultivators), author describing MC's handsomeness and stuff about his former world and cultivation and plot armors. Nothing to expect from the story, even the bed scenes are bland.

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