Moonfrost

you wrote in the last chapters about terrorist but never metions a religion,so how did you come up with muslims dont feel offended?? Its like only muslims are terrorist you have the wrong mind set ^^

a kekkaigenkai is like a mutation in the ninja world like the dojutsu (sharikngan etc.) sooo you could say that having chiii or control over the natural energy is the same like juugos power too absorb natural energy,only that the mc can control the manifest the natural energy into elements like jutsus

longest Prologue ^^But its good hope he wont get rebort in Konoha like most fanfics

When you copy the work of other from MTL Novel than try to edit the english pls........