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Vodoley
VodoleyLv65yr
2018-12-26 19:02

TOTAL disappointment! Disappointment due to time spent reading. In chapter 3452, the author got tired of writing: MC quickly killed the BIGEST enemy of all novel and in the next (final) chapter together with 3 wives, returned to the first plane of existence (out of 33) and HEA. WTF?! A bunch of storylines are not closed. What kind of tree and how is it related to the MC? What kind of animal spirit does he cultivate? Asura - we never know where it came from and what to do with it. Do you still remember the MC from the modern Earth? Forget it! It does not affect the MC. Except how to divert lightning, his knowledge is no longer useful. Often the MC is not consistent in his actions and applied skills. Do you know that in each plane of existence there can be different worlds and why the author writes about it and how it helps MC, etc. Out of the 33 plane of existence MC only reached the 5th. After the 3rd read novel was already boring and the author no longer knew where to develop the story and MC. In general, the concept of the work and the MC is fresh and different from other works, it was interesting to read the first half. Only for this 4 stars.

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Review:- The novel's cultivation system has not been described in detail yet, so I'm not gonna talk about it right now. MC of this novel is cool, calm, likeable and doesn't put on any airs. He is ambitious but not reckless. He seems to be the kind of guy who always takes calculated risk and always keeps a few cards hidden so as to meet exigent cirumstances head on. He is also a decent guy, not like Fang Yuan, etc. He is a scholar before transmigration and after too. He doesn't get any fortuitous encounters or meet any great sage. He reads, understands and draws inferences from scriptures to develop his powers. Other characters in this novel are well etched out too except his rival who is annoying. Female characters don't fall for MC left, right and centre but they are not the kind who are malicious to plot against the MC for no reason either. Maybe such characters might show up in the novel later on, considering the novel is 3000+ chapters long. In other words, this novel has female characters who behave like people in 'real life'. Plot moves at a leisurely pace- which I believe is the reason it's not popular- but doesn't get repetitive, the author explores the various aspects of the world as the novel progresses. The fights are grounded in the current arc but it will get Xianxiaesque in future chapters I suppose. The world is based on feudal China with sects on end of the power balance and the Emperor on the other hand. Overlall this is a really good novel to read, if you are tired of other cliched novels on this site but I gotta warn you that it takes time to hit the spot. If you are looking for a good non-cliched- no arrogant young masters lining up on the death queue, no fortuitous enocunters growing on rooftops, etc- novel, you should probably give this one a try.

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