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VoraciousReaderLv106yr
2018-08-07 02:25

Wow, so many people freaking out in the comments of negative reviews. Water Army much? At least these kind of reactions and reviews seem to be often incurring with QI novels, though the twelve year olds and the like cannot be ruled out I guess. Or is this about the proofreader and translator asking for 5 star reviews as incentive for more releases? Read to the latest chapter (61) out of boredom and daresay that I can predict quite a bit of the story already. Sorry I do not evaluate this story highly either and certainly do not expect any surprises regarding the further development. I rate the translation quality highly but the story gives me quite generic impression. Silkpants reincarnation, revenge plots, previously useless "trash" char now impresses everyone as the mc and keeps face slapping everyone that looks down on him, of course after long build ups and fillers that point out how awesome the mc is that also serve to increase the word count. MC of course has all kind of high level cultivation techniques and the super awesome alchemy emperor knowledge at hand due to his previous life. Sorry, nothing particularly interesting or different imho. Curiously looking forward whether this review will be deleted or what the fanboy/water armies will call me.

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CyzeedLv10

Yeah, lots of comment for the negative review and rating and fanboy raid their review with some attack. Its good to write a negative review because I also put some negative review for some novel that I read but some people need to mind the word they put in it because it might offend some people. But just people like you, you put negative review but the way of the word you put in it way better than some people that its acceptable and even can give some knowlege for the current reader and future reader about the current chapter of this novel so far and give them a better understanding.

1vaderLv11

The thing is, I don't even mind reincarnated face-slapping MCs. But this is just done too poorly.

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Hi everyone, this is cele, the translator of this novel~ About the synopsis, it's translated from raws, so I'll be leaving the author's synopsis up. TL's synopsis will be here for now. Qingyun Zi was betrayed and murdered. Just when he thought that everything was over, he wakes up in a new body, the body of a silkpants named Ye Yuan. As he embarks on a new life, he struggles to cope with the loss of loved ones as well as accept his new identity. Unresigned to his fate, Ye Yuan resolves to make his way back to the top while hiding his identity from his old enemies as he plots his revenge. How did he revive? Will he be exposed and die with countless regrets? Was there a mastermind behind all this? With all these questions and more in his heart, Ye Yuan resolves to seek out answers as he uncovers a darker plot behind all this . . . This is a short spoiler free (I hope) review from me. While some people will be turned off by the genre, or because they read a few chapters of MTL, I'll just state maybe two major selling points for me which differentiates this novel from the other eastern fantasy novels out there. Firstly, as the title suggests, alchemy plays a major role in this novel. While many novels also have alchemy, the MC's life basically revolves around alchemy here, which is different from how alchemy is normally considered an auxiliary skill. The MC here views it as much more, which he also proves later on in the novel (multiple times). Rather than mindless fighting, I like a novel that touches more on the other aspects. Second, and I feel that this is by far the biggest selling point for me. THE MC IS NOT A HOMICIDAL MANIAC! He doesn't go like: "Hey you, you had a lewd face when looking at my wife no. 69, I'll kill your entire family and revive your ancestors to kill them as revenge. Then, I'll extinguish all karma threads tied to you, killing everyone that even remotely knows you!" AND THE BAD GUYS HERE ARE NORMAL!! They don't go around killing people for some stupid reason. They worry about repercussions from going overboard! These people weren't dropped on their heads as a baby like those arrogant mass murderers who will slaughter entire cities because someone looked at them funny. They are actually people that you can like! To me, it's like a breath of fresh air from those madmen in AST or MGA. Yeah, so, a good story is about delivery rather than the idea anyway. So don't skip it just because of its genre. I won't go any further in detail to prevent spoilers. Just drop me a message on webnovel discord if you have any questions. I'm online on discord often. *shameless 5-star reviews for myself.

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