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DaIHen
DaIHenLv56yr
2018-07-30 17:04

Sorry for my English --------- My little description --------- I have already read 160 chapters, and this novel is quite good. As in the genre of Xia Xia, in this story there are schools, sects, secret techniques, but also present elements of modernity. But unlike other xia novels they do not use qi for cultivation, they use "cards". And our main character is a poor man who finds an unusual card that includes step-by-step instruction on creating "special" cards. And so he begins his adventure. About main character. Our protagonist is hard working, he is calm minded and pretty lucky. And he is not like "i wil kill your parents, son, aunt cuz you gave me an ugly look". He also does not show off and tries to be low-key About world background. I can not say that the author describes everything in detail, but enough to understand what kind of world, environment and situation is happening. About plot. In my opinion there is no main plot. It is like plot consisting of arcs,in which he only wants to learn about cards, become stronger etc. About romance. Read up to 160 chapters, but did not notice the romance. I asked the translator and he replied that he would have a girlfriend(>ω^)lol. Genres: adventure, fantasy, action Tags: adequate protagonist, alternative universe,male protagonist, another world, magical engineering, magic, from poor to rich, from weak to strong, hard-working protagonist P.S Do not ask where I read 160 chapters, and in what language. I will not say P.P.S And yes, sorry for my English (シ_ _)シ

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Duchess
DuchessLv10

That is my ideal mc tbh, being quite reserved with his actions. Thank you for this.

Iightlyred
IightlyredLv4

The same thing duchless said.. And once more thank you #u made me curious on where u read this😂

BOOKLOVER2020
BOOKLOVER2020Lv11

yes, it's nice to read about an even tempered MC.

Duchess:That is my ideal mc tbh, being quite reserved with his actions. Thank you for this.
Am3lia
Am3liaLv15

You have no need to apologize for your English, your better than most native speakers. I do not give out compliments easily. Thank you for your description it was very helpful.

Griphon
GriphonLv7

Your description makes me want to read this And “a girlfriend” makes me definitely want to read this Thank you

ShadowWave
ShadowWaveLv13

Is mc actually lowkey or is he low key like in library of heavens path?

DaIHen
DaIHenLv5

mc is normal but for me he is lowkey because he does not want to get into trouble, he does not want to stand out, he knows that he is not too strong or i am wrong with the word "lowkey"

ShadowWave:Is mc actually lowkey or is he low key like in library of heavens path?
DaIHen
DaIHenLv5

yeah i know

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pablitos
pablitosLv4

In reality, I don't remember anything bad in your sentence that I noticed

DaIHen:yeah i know
SupperLemon
SupperLemonLv5

This probably doesn't fit here, but just for the lolz - r/whoosh

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NoBookNoLife
NoBookNoLifeLv14

It made me lolz........😔.....😖.......🤣🤣🤣

SupperLemon:This probably doesn't fit here, but just for the lolz - r/whoosh
DaoistFatGrandma
DaoistFatGrandmaLv5

God dam look at those gorgeous boo- ....eyes!

NoBookNoLife:It made me lolz........😔.....😖.......🤣🤣🤣
raniyag92
raniyag92Lv5

Thank you for your review. It's really makes me curious about the novel.i am looking forward ☺ About your p.s: You can able to convey your thoughts ,that's enough.No one born with perfection

Daoist_Evernight
Daoist_EvernightLv13

Where did you read 160 chapters and in what language?

Sonayke
SonaykeLv5

I suppose Russian language 😂 they translate from Chinese directly

Daoist_Evernight:Where did you read 160 chapters and in what language?
FlashBangMaster
FlashBangMasterLv5

Yeah I'm a native and I'm probably worse with english.

Am3lia:You have no need to apologize for your English, your better than most native speakers. I do not give out compliments easily. Thank you for your description it was very helpful.
Xamar
XamarLv13

I smell a conspiracy! ***P.S Do not ask where I read 160 chapters, and in what language. I will not say ***

Xamar
XamarLv13

Good novel i ll try it when open

DrakonasXiii
DrakonasXiiiLv15

Hey your English is great and thanks for this it has made me even more interested to read this.

Kiba2107
Kiba2107Lv5

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mya22
mya22Lv4

Too many info dump. Literally too many. The narrator is trying too hard to get the spotlight. I just want to know what will he do to the mysterious card but in the next moment narrator started explaining the history of the card, the founder, the next important figure for card master, method to make power card, etc. Dude if his action always comes with hellish narration i wonder how is the fight scene. Mc: "He is 3 rank card master! How unlucky!". Narrator kicks in: 3 rank card master is..., the difference from 1 rank card master and..., the famous 3 rank card master in the past is..., the current 3 rank card master is.... 3 rank card master takes a powerful card. Mc : "That card!" Narrator kicks in again: That card is..., its power..., its origin..., the first maker of that card..., the expert who use that card usually.... disadvantage of... advantage of... the difficulty to make that card... in order to make a high quality, an essential item called... Mc feels the danger is approaching, he looks in his surrounding in hope of a way to escape this predicament. Then he found a tall abandoned building. Mc: "I have to hide there." Naturally, narrator kicks in: that building is... , that building is useful for... in the past people used the building to..., the mason name... the mayor who put the first stone... mayor affair in the building got exposed by his... Or something like that. I will not surprised if later in the future the narrator explain potato chip for half of the chapter.

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