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Millman97Translator6yr
2018-11-26 18:12

Editor review. Hey guys, glad to see this novel finally published :D It's been in the works for over a year now, but due to a few changes of translators, it'll been constantly delayed. When we lost the first translator, I specifically requested to stay on this project because I enjoy the story so much. So, obviously, I'm a big fan of the story. The MC has some heartfelt moments, some hilarious moments (the 'Spicy.' in one of the early chapters killed me), and some smart/scheming moments, which is pretty much all I ask for in a novel :D If you have any questions or notice any errors or inconsistencies (they're inevitable, especially with a change of translator midway), feel free to reply here or message me on Discord. My ID is millman97#8008.

The Legendary Mechanic

Qi Peijia
4.6
1463 Chs

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Neverfire7Lv10

:)

6yr
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Millman97Translator

*it's been constantly delayed. 🤦‍♂️

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Chr100Lv14

Any reason why its only 7/week. Most new novels has 14/week.

6yr
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Millman97Translator

It depends on the translator's contract and the size of the stockpile. The release rate will probably go up in the future but not anytime soon 😝

Chr100:Any reason why its only 7/week. Most new novels has 14/week.
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lonely_samuraiLv5

when is the next part I whant to read it right now

6yr
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izuskyLv5

For real

lonely_samurai:when is the next part I whant to read it right now
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MandabulltheMadLv14

An editor! Thank the gods! I look forward to a novel with completed sentences and people that can double check basic math like addition!

6yr
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radamsLv10

gg

6yr
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PhatKidLovesCakeLv11

This harem? My brain cells havent accumulated enough if it is 😂

6yr
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Millman97Translator

There's no harem as far as I've read 😊

PhatKidLovesCake:This harem? My brain cells havent accumulated enough if it is 😂
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Astolfo_My_WaifuLv10

Love the story still 7ch/week ... When is the story gonna have 21ch/week SIGH

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FengTianLv4

Is the TL same as the writer?

Millman97:There's no harem as far as I've read 😊
6yr
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Millman97Translator

Pretty sure it isn't. I think Webnovel just messed up somewhere.

FengTian:Is the TL same as the writer?
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AnsraerLv5

What rank do you need to release more chapters? (I am assuming that you have some form of contract covering that.) Power ranking 6 already sounds like it should be worth at least 14chaps/week. 😋

6yr
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Astolfo_My_WaifuLv10

Didn't you say the first chapters are translater by the author ?? Weird

Millman97:Pretty sure it isn't. I think Webnovel just messed up somewhere.
6yr
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Millman97Translator

No contract covering that, it's all left to the translator's discretion; as long as you meet your minimum amount, Webnovel don't care 😅 As for if we'll release bonus chapters, we'll see what our ranking is next week before we decide anything. There's a trend of new novels being high the first week and dropping in the rankings immediately after, so we'll wait and see what happens next week 😄

Ansraer:What rank do you need to release more chapters? (I am assuming that you have some form of contract covering that.) Power ranking 6 already sounds like it should be worth at least 14chaps/week. 😋
6yr
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Millman97Translator

Na, the first chapters were translated by a translator who has since left Webnovel 🙃

Astolfo_My_Waifu:Didn't you say the first chapters are translater by the author ?? Weird
6yr
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PrimitLv11

That's unfortunate, i was just marvelling at the translation quality ( i swear 60% of the novels on this site are barely better than MTL). Hopefully the new translator is just as good as the first chapters.

Millman97:Na, the first chapters were translated by a translator who has since left Webnovel 🙃
6yr
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PrimitLv11

I'll vote for you, this stuff is awesome!!!

Millman97:No contract covering that, it's all left to the translator's discretion; as long as you meet your minimum amount, Webnovel don't care 😅 As for if we'll release bonus chapters, we'll see what our ranking is next week before we decide anything. There's a trend of new novels being high the first week and dropping in the rankings immediately after, so we'll wait and see what happens next week 😄
6yr
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Millman97Translator

I think I'm fortunate that all the translators I work with are excellent 😁

Primit:That's unfortunate, i was just marvelling at the translation quality ( i swear 60% of the novels on this site are barely better than MTL). Hopefully the new translator is just as good as the first chapters.
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