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CaptainBunny1Lv56yr
2018-12-01 04:23

{I'd like to start off my apologizing for how long this review is.} At first I began reading this story a few years back because I was bored, since the stories I was reading at the time weren't updated yet, and the plot some what interested me. I ended up putting it on hold for a long time. And then picked it up again a while back. But anyway, I'm glad I gave the story a chance when I did. I truly enjoy reading the story and the interesting plot twists have had me wondering time and time again how the other is going to explain certain developments later on. The only issue I personally have is that certain characters angered and annoyed me consistantly. I find myself wishing they'd go away. [Spoiler] (NOT REALLY A SPOILER BUT STILL) I'm someone who hates harems with a burning passion. I'm not sure why but they bug me. And although this story isn't a reverse harem there are certain aspects and 'scenes' that can give off that impression. (REAL SPOILER) Anyone that has read the raws up to 1,312 or so knows the main characters, female and male leads, start taking care of the son the don't know they had for varying reasons. The time they spend together is a truly wonderful, heart warming, read and I can't wait for the official translation to be released. However, hardships occur and the mini family is split apart an d secrets are revealed. The reason I brought this up is because the steady flow of how all this occurs is, in my opinion, very smooth. Thus showing the skill of the author. Many times I found myself thinking how talented the author is to be able to write and develop the story how intricately as they have. [End of Spoiler] And in regards to the translation quality I think the editors and translators are doing a good job. The only think I'd recommend or rather that if like to request is that they increase the number of chapter published a week. Currently 2 chapters are released per day, making that 14 chapter a week. Which is honestly quite phenomenal. However, the issue is that since this is an ongoing serious we can't be sure when the author will finish with. At present (as of 11/30/18) there are 1,916 chapters published, and only 809 chapters have been translated. That means it'll take about 79 weeks, assuming my math is correct, to catch up to the current 1,107 chapter that have yet to me translated. Which I find kind of bizarre and slightly annoying. Again I'd like to say that I don't mean to sound rude or anything towards the individuals taking the time out of there day to translate and edit this story. Thank you, anyone who took the time to read this. And sorry for the unnecessarily long comment/review.

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SupremeSwanLv4

Do You know if the raw version is still on going or completed?? What are the total chapters released till now?? Can you let me know where did you get raw ??

CaptainBunny1Lv5

Sorry for the late reply. Um, the story is still ongoing and their are at this very moment 2048 chapters. This is the link I use to read the chapter raws on my phone: • htt**://m.boquge.com/wapbook/72173.html • http://m.biquge.com.cn/book/29950/ The first link only had the first 1403 and the second has the rest. Just be aware that like most raw mobile sites, the 2nd link had explicit ads. So if anything I'd look up the title and pick one with as few as possible, or that least works for you. At the moment I haven't been able to find one that doesn't have those ads besides Qidian, but I don't have the money to unlock them nor do I want to spend money just for the raws.

SupremeSwan:Do You know if the raw version is still on going or completed?? What are the total chapters released till now?? Can you let me know where did you get raw ??
SupremeSwanLv4

Thank you

jmbrianafenisLv13

Thanks for the info.....

Char_Lv5

Where I can found more spoilers.. Is he really going to die at the end. I have read the novel only up to 400 chapter

Char_Lv5

Where I can found more spoilers.. Is he really going to die at the end. I have read the novel only up to 400 chapter

Marjor3eLv11

Try something new and unique - The King's Beloved - i recommend it if you like romance fiction, totally not a cliche story

CaptainBunny1Lv5

Only 969 more chapters to go~!!!!! Yayyyyy~!

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EbayRoseLv6

Okay, first the Stockholm syndrome tag is a little inaccurate. The main guy that is keeping the MC girl(Ye Wanwan) captive is basically a head, or at least the heir, of a Chinese mafia family. I don't mean gangster, I mean he could affect the entire Chinese economy if he wanted to. So he is super elite/wealthy/powerful and has an entirely different rule book from the average person. He has had family try to murder him, succeed in killing his father, and nearly killed him leaving him with poor health and an insomnia. His insomnia fuels his violent nature and temper (which is from his environment) and that has led to be cruel towards the Ye Wanwan whenever he felt she betrayed him. So if a romance with a violently temperamental mafia lord is too much for you, even if most of his violence towards the MC is in the past, then you won't enjoy this much. But the author's writing style keeps things light instead of sucking you into the violence, though it is present. This is mostly a MC personal journey to victory/romance story. The MC is reincarnated into her own past self who is still in school, several years before she found out the truth about the two people she trusted and cared about the most and then died. The man she wanted to marry and her 'best friend' had never cared for her and both had been using her, lying to, and betraying her since the beginning. This instantly crushes any former romantic feelings she had and she no longer feels the need to escape from the guy she had been rejecting all this time who had essentially imprisoned her. Though she doesn't have any good feelings towards him and wants her *******, she is able to calmly assess that so long as she avoids rejecting him or making him jealous then he will not harm her. Quite the opposite in fact. Over time her terror of him lessens, though she never forgets what he is capable of, and she begins to see that he is out-right devoted to her. And after the betrayal she's been through that is a charming feature to be sure. She starts seeing his cute/awkward side, and understanding him and what has made him violent, it helps that he is handsome and seductive. But she really doesn't plan to stay with him or fall in love with him until much later on. At first she charms him into giving her more ******* after expressing no more interest in the other guy she used to want. Then she just starts to accept him as a dangerous but useful part of her life, slowly becomes attached and not wanting him to die. Accepting his as her husband essentially as long as he gives her some ******* to reach her goals of revenge. And then finally will fall for him and fully accept his love for her, by her better understanding of why he was obsessively protective/ controlling/ violently jealous and getting him to be less so by showing her own strength, improving his health, proving again no interest in other guy, and proving she won't betray him. After that he becomes almost the ideal lover. So I get why it could seem Stockholm like but it really isn't. They just come to trust each other slowly based on merit and she then accepts him. Which doesn't happen until she has a lot more *******.

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