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MaiEvilPanda
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2018-02-27 04:20

First time ever write a review.. So like everyone else I was waiting for this to come out. As it seem like something I'll get really into to. But I couldnt... It I don't know.. 4 chapter in and it seems the main character isn't real at all to me.. He throw everything he was away to fast and became someone new. It feels like he doesn't have a real back story that make you want to be at his side and cheer him on. It went from dam got it by lighting, reincarnated, let me use millions of year making myself a body while I'll tell you about everything else that about the world and all the culturing I'll have to do, oh finally got a body talk about myself for 20 seconds and how I feel like I'm a cpu and all the other clones are small cup and back to talking about things that put you to sleep... Overall fir me the picture they use is so much clickbait... At least in the book "True Martial Arts World" he waa fighting for everything that he had and wanted to go all the way to the top. This is more like well this place is very peaceful and you can call her all you want become really strong without anyone getting in your way.. Sorry but for me this is like watching paint dry not worth it. It make me sad to say it tho. But it true and I been waiting for this to come out too.. Oh well maybe the next book that released will be better.

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TorrentAB
TorrentABLv14

You should vote for Silent Crown! I don’t think it’ll be like this one, and I feel like Treasure Hunt will be a lot like Ming-He, in that it’s a lot of talking about treasures with little plot

MaiEvilPanda
MaiEvilPandaLv5

I was so disappointed in this one tho... But if you think that one is good I'll go check it out and see. But dam this one.. God I don't know why they made this book.. Hopefully someone give me the chapter were it because good or at least make the main seem a bit real/cool...

TorrentAB:You should vote for Silent Crown! I don’t think it’ll be like this one, and I feel like Treasure Hunt will be a lot like Ming-He, in that it’s a lot of talking about treasures with little plot
JSJJ
JSJJLv12

Read "Joy of Life". The first chapter may seem low , but then the real fun begins. There's humor, plot , and a likeable MC. No clichés.

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