Possibly the most disappointing novel I’ve ever voted for. Confusing and boring is how I would describe it. Half the chapter is spent on describing every treasure he has, why it’s important, and what it can do. I can’t even tell if there’s a plot underneath all this description. Absolutely no hook to make me want to read more, no motivation for the main character, no reason to care about his previous life, and no interesting world building. Seems more like a rough draft or an idea chart than an actual story. Maybe it’s the translation from Chinese to English, or maybe it appeals more to Chinese culture, all I know is I don’t like it
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LIKESorry to make you confuse about the whole thing. This is the first book author wrote so he has many things to learn. And there are many terms relate to Chinese culture. Out team will try our best to let you understand the story. I hope you will find more interesting in the following chapters.
I can understand that, writing your first story is hard. I appreciate your hard work in translating this, even if I didn’t enjoy it. You still have plenty of fans, and I might even check it out later to see if the later chapters get better. Thank you for your hard work, and have a nice day!
Transn:Sorry to make you confuse about the whole thing. This is the first book author wrote so he has many things to learn. And there are many terms relate to Chinese culture. Out team will try our best to let you understand the story. I hope you will find more interesting in the following chapters.
There are a lot of books like this one, but it is unique as the MC being overpowered is relative and the MC achievements comes from his own hardwork, it's not common out there as most MC achievements are more dependent on adventures. It's a good read if you are patient enough to see the MC power take shape, though the book is hurried, maybe that's what you find confusing with all the time skip, if you read it patiently, you will find it okay among other books like it.