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zaim
zaimLv57yr
2017-12-06 14:37

really fast paced beginning, crazy power ups, it seemed interesting......but the MC's shallowness kinda threw me off. And the nonsensical powers are also a let down. No matter how unscientific, if you set it up right it would be acceptable, but the author here does a very poor job of it.

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Master_Tubby
Master_TubbyLv5

its almost like the author is just writing about his fantasy...

AndreiMihai
AndreiMihaiLv5

Iap. I love this novel and i want more!!!

Chunchunmaru_sama
Chunchunmaru_samaLv6

Hey bro its better than slow paced novels What crazy power ups? Nonsensical powers?? Unscientific?? Dude bro most novels have power ups,nonsensical powers,and is unscientific

Chunchunmaru_sama
Chunchunmaru_samaLv6

But people are still reading it which means its good.....

Chunchunmaru_sama:Hey bro its better than slow paced novels What crazy power ups? Nonsensical powers?? Unscientific?? Dude bro most novels have power ups,nonsensical powers,and is unscientific
zaim
zaimLv5

I actually liked the fast pace btw. Idk why you decided to ignore the last part of my review where i clearly said, no matter how unscientific, if it's set up right, it can work.

Chunchunmaru_sama:Hey bro its better than slow paced novels What crazy power ups? Nonsensical powers?? Unscientific?? Dude bro most novels have power ups,nonsensical powers,and is unscientific
Chunchunmaru_sama
Chunchunmaru_samaLv6

Hmm kay prob didnt see that its 3:40 am here and my eyes are failing me

zaim:I actually liked the fast pace btw. Idk why you decided to ignore the last part of my review where i clearly said, no matter how unscientific, if it's set up right, it can work.
AnthonyCerbic
AnthonyCerbicLv5

LOL, wrong. "People keep reading" and "being good" are not related at all. People watch **** movies all the time, doesn't make **** any good as a movie.

Chunchunmaru_sama:But people are still reading it which means its good.....
Kyossai
KyossaiLv3

Gg

Kyossai
KyossaiLv3

Gg

Noire
NoireLv14

These are works that can tell how much quality has fallen when it comes to people's reading capabilities. Another theme park ride.

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