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chu_chan
chu_chanLv67yr
2017-12-16 21:11

This story is inteded to be a modern comedic story, well thats what it intends to be, but until now it is just the story of a nouveau riche who just gets drunk on his riches, slaps the faces of all other love rivals and the chicks just love him without real reason. yeah the mc is just too shallow, author says he comes from the countryside and is nice to his parents blablabla, but truthfully the mc is just a vulgar dick, seriously **** out of someones mouth? this story feels too rushed and the sidecharacters are too brainless, like the teacher chick. seriously wtf is she thinking loaning money by prostituting herself. or the one who cucked him also the wenfeng guy, like stfu if you got slapped 3 times you should know to be a bit more careful. also wtf is wrong with the mc showing off his wealth so openly and so fast, in return no one questions where he got all that stuff from. everyone just goes along with it, just normal for poor students to keep national treasures under their pillows and carying around perfectly preserved tang dynasty treasures.

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fellow_daoist123
fellow_daoist123Lv5

lol at least get paid instead of a loan

chu_chan
chu_chanLv6

also the translation is really slow, it says 9 ch per week but that only because there was one day with patreon goal reached. the chapters itself a riddled with mistakes, be it grammar or mispelled words.

SpiritMouse
SpiritMouseLv3

I am sure that in the USA, you would be audited. Assets of unknown origins can get you in deep **** depending on their nature and what excuse you have. But usually you get through it with a fee if it is not too bad. I want a novel where this happens to a character. Just imagine a scene where an office lady ( hot office lady probably if its a chinese author.) stares down the guy with a deadpan look. ( cause all office workers are dead inside.) I would write that character in as the straight man for a comedy magical realism cultivator story. Befriend the lady and she slowly figures the MC out during the few weeks of following him and his paper trail. Forget unknown peanut galleries, we have our office lady figuring out the mystery of the MC through out the novel, maybe join him later as a partner or be set up as a antagonist. Hell, it could even go down the romance or side romance route. ah ****, gotta go write it down now.

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