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LordFatCat
LordFatCatLv47yr
2017-12-04 22:46

This one is worse than even rps. The world building is the exact copy. Intro chapters are lukewarm. Characters are talking gibberish to cover up mess up plot. No creative moments here. Too many fk up logic. ( For example, Gifting 10 millions$ hairpin to a girl because she buy the gold worth of 0.6 mil from mc . Can the mc even count?) Translation is okay, i think. But it is just a bad story tbh.

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Intayaw_din_Dagem
Intayaw_din_DagemLv10

Look. This novel was released three or four weeks earlier than Red Packet Server. And remember, this is a webnovel so this story at least 3 stars in webnovel standard. If you're going to complain about logic, plot, and character building, go read a real phucking novel. Like the published, reviewed-by-literature-critics novels.

LordFatCat
LordFatCatLv4

It is simply a rubbish story. There are many good webnovels out there (around 40,000 webnovels) that are better than this one in story, transition and can satisfy readers. And you can choose read this phucking junk instead :)

Intayaw_din_Dagem:Look. This novel was released three or four weeks earlier than Red Packet Server. And remember, this is a webnovel so this story at least 3 stars in webnovel standard. If you're going to complain about logic, plot, and character building, go read a real phucking novel. Like the published, reviewed-by-literature-critics novels.
Frosch
FroschLv4

I thought from reading his review you could see that he is.... I've read a couple of chapters and honestly seeing some reviews I'm not impressed. Too bad there's no dislike button on webnovel

Intayaw_din_Dagem:Look. This novel was released three or four weeks earlier than Red Packet Server. And remember, this is a webnovel so this story at least 3 stars in webnovel standard. If you're going to complain about logic, plot, and character building, go read a real phucking novel. Like the published, reviewed-by-literature-critics novels.
bigbigdic
bigbigdicLv4

Dude..

Intayaw_din_Dagem:Look. This novel was released three or four weeks earlier than Red Packet Server. And remember, this is a webnovel so this story at least 3 stars in webnovel standard. If you're going to complain about logic, plot, and character building, go read a real phucking novel. Like the published, reviewed-by-literature-critics novels.
chu_chan
chu_chanLv6

If you really cared to look into which one was released earlier you would know that red packet server was released earlier on a different site before it migrated to qidian. Even for webnovel standard this one is sub par, riddled with illogical story, too much plot armor and racist content. This is also the reason why it has only 6.9 rating on qidian instead of what red packet server has 8.7. On novelupdates it is even worse 2.4 vs 4.6. Just get your facts straight before your fanboying spews too much fake news.

Intayaw_din_Dagem:Look. This novel was released three or four weeks earlier than Red Packet Server. And remember, this is a webnovel so this story at least 3 stars in webnovel standard. If you're going to complain about logic, plot, and character building, go read a real phucking novel. Like the published, reviewed-by-literature-critics novels.
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