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2020-04-11 11:04

First of all , I only have one thing to say about the story . I loved the story but as it continued there is one thing i really hated about the novel so much that i quit in between because that same mistakes keeps repeating again and again. The problem is that , the mc keeps getting himself in trouble again and again despite when it's very easy to escape from it from reader's perspective , that's right and this never stops . Well forget about this , i can somehow still bear it until i finish reading because i still enjoy it . What i really didn't like is , despite creating all these problems himself he kepts crying and wishing he was more powerful to not let his friends die , even his wife(she is not dead) but she had a lot of problems relating to this such that this guy still worries so much about it that he still purposefully gets himself in trouble like an idiot. Rest all stuff i found very interesting , but like this trait of novel that never stops happening pissed me off lie hell.

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