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luffy31
luffy31Lv56yr
2018-07-31 23:30

It is quite a good novel, don't know why the rating is so low. Love the main character. Although I have one doubt, how the hell can not the mc remember all of his previous knowledge. sometimes it is shown that he is trying very hard to remember. although he has one of the nest memories.

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JohnDoer
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Time to quit this novel. 1. MC has no real goals and motives to become strong. Just a vague saying to "reach martial hights". Don't like aimless arrows shooting nowhere. 2. Story development is too slow. Fed up with this little royal intrigues. This is a martial arts novel, right? 3. No good written character, just a bunch of so-so written cliche ones like "fat and loyal friend", "quiet and hardworking friend", "tsundere girl" and etc. 4. The cultivation system is a mess. Why not use the standard system of 9 stages with 9 parts (houtian, xiantaian and etc). Author tried to create new system? Well, he failed. absolutely confusing system. 5. Fed up with authors exagerrations. Millions years of life just cause of the pill? And he also uses completely nonsene sentences just to write "cool" text, something like "A man and a saber sat under the moon." WTF? when sabers became living things which can sit? 6. Author sometimes make charcters act and then try to justify their actions. That's wrong. Cause when you see that character acts this way without any reason you already change your view if him/her and when author tries to justify his/her actions later, well, it doesn't work, cause his/her image was already ruined. author needs to first build a reason to hate somebody and give reasons to certain actions and then make characters act, not vice versa. 7. Names. Names of the skills, techniques and etc. suks. 8. Too OP skills. According to the descriptions if MC learns just this dagger technique there will be no suspense in his future. Then why bother readin we already can guess that he will kill everybody easily. Well, there are too many problems with this novel. thanks for the mistakes of the author, now i will try to avoid something like that.

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