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moonKe
moonKeLv57yr
2017-12-12 15:14

a novel more concerned about the management of various people than actually intelligent story-telling. most of the middle ream of this novel revolves around MC saving various relatives, random chicks he meets, and ect... if youre expecting a great adventure full of the exploration into the unknown, dungeon diving, and epic martial arts you've come to the wrong town. the novel tricks you though, the first 500~ or so chapters are really well done, the interactions between the MC and various people FEELS natural, and it takes a grim dark tone that sets you up for a truly intellectual story. but when the MC starts saving all those people, you know youve stepped on a turd, that is more concerned with happy-endings than having an ***** conversation with consequences for actions. a true shame, nothing real here, all intellectually bankrupt.

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moonKe
moonKeLv5

censored = a.dult conversation.

DaoistThreeFingers
DaoistThreeFingersLv6

Got to around 999 chapters and just had to stop since it's just moving ridiculously slow padded with alot of nonsense dialogues and busy bodying of either the mc or some important figure. Cultivations level of mc moves slow as fck too it's not even funny. At 999 he still hasn't reach the emperor level.

moonKe
moonKeLv5

yeah that never really stops even up until the end. it's the go to example for wasted potential.

DaoistThreeFingers:Got to around 999 chapters and just had to stop since it's just moving ridiculously slow padded with alot of nonsense dialogues and busy bodying of either the mc or some important figure. Cultivations level of mc moves slow as fck too it's not even funny. At 999 he still hasn't reach the emperor level.
DaoistThreeFingers
DaoistThreeFingersLv6

What destroyed it for me is the rampant use of tournaments in this novel that last so fcking long. At 999 I think we've had like 3-4 long as fck tournaments and it's just excruciatingly bad to read

moonKe:yeah that never really stops even up until the end. it's the go to example for wasted potential.
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JohnDoer
JohnDoerLv5

Time to quit this novel. 1. MC has no real goals and motives to become strong. Just a vague saying to "reach martial hights". Don't like aimless arrows shooting nowhere. 2. Story development is too slow. Fed up with this little royal intrigues. This is a martial arts novel, right? 3. No good written character, just a bunch of so-so written cliche ones like "fat and loyal friend", "quiet and hardworking friend", "tsundere girl" and etc. 4. The cultivation system is a mess. Why not use the standard system of 9 stages with 9 parts (houtian, xiantaian and etc). Author tried to create new system? Well, he failed. absolutely confusing system. 5. Fed up with authors exagerrations. Millions years of life just cause of the pill? And he also uses completely nonsene sentences just to write "cool" text, something like "A man and a saber sat under the moon." WTF? when sabers became living things which can sit? 6. Author sometimes make charcters act and then try to justify their actions. That's wrong. Cause when you see that character acts this way without any reason you already change your view if him/her and when author tries to justify his/her actions later, well, it doesn't work, cause his/her image was already ruined. author needs to first build a reason to hate somebody and give reasons to certain actions and then make characters act, not vice versa. 7. Names. Names of the skills, techniques and etc. suks. 8. Too OP skills. According to the descriptions if MC learns just this dagger technique there will be no suspense in his future. Then why bother readin we already can guess that he will kill everybody easily. Well, there are too many problems with this novel. thanks for the mistakes of the author, now i will try to avoid something like that.

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