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XLKIR007
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2017-10-25 08:51

Ok, first off, let me negate all the low ratings. Secondly, I know that a lot of people have been gathering hate for this in the past few days (weeks) because of the fillers and the romance. Well let me tell you. This Is A Classic! It occured to me that the author is now aiming for this novel to have a tv series adaptation going by feel and nature of this story. As a classic CN would have that "classical" feel of love on the battlefield, a true polymerization of Action and Romance, a blend of youthful vibes and adrenaline if all kinds, a combination of.... Ak pui~ who am I kidding!? This is a Korean Drama for pete's sake! Read this novel and you'll get a girlfriend, that's all I have to say.

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TuanMuda
TuanMudaLv5

Lol Read this and got a girlfriend, well said! But like he say, it's easy to fallin love but it's hard to stay together for day and night.

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XLKIR007
XLKIR007Lv4

endure bruh, endure, what lies at the end of the road is "happiness"

TuanMuda:Lol Read this and got a girlfriend, well said! But like he say, it's easy to fallin love but it's hard to stay together for day and night.
hola1829
hola1829Lv5

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FunFun
FunFunLv4

Well, thanks for sparing me of my time.

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PocketSandLv5

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