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funmaxwellLv135yr
2019-05-14 01:40

This is the most trash novel I've ever read in my life and the that fact people are giving this novel 5 star's make me lose faith in humanity. In the very fist chapter it's made evidently clear that author is a very special person as in his mind literature is classified as a category of science. Then in next 30 or chapters the only close thing to a love rival to mc is the heroines fist cousin ya you heard me right pretty bad huh but oh it get so much worse. Not only is he the mc only clear love rival for the fist 30 chapter's but you get to read his cringe inner monolog about why isn't my fist cousin hooking up with me. Uuuuuuuuggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhggg. Sorry i was throwing up. Then the products of science seem to be everywhere without so much any explanation in a fictional world that's supposed to be without science and the magic system seems to be a combination between a cultivation novel and avatar the last air bender which only make the products of science in world supposedly without even more baffling. Want to know something even more disgusting this novel has an anime & manga. When dozens of novels billions of times better than this one don't have ether.

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FazzuhryyLv5

Thanks for the info , glad that i read your review

mahmudulhasanshanLv1

Are you referring to Ye Xinxia as his first cousin. IF so than it also made me really disgusted but you conveniently left out the part that they aren't related in any way and she can be called a freeloader. She is not related to him by blood or law.So, I don't think it should be as disgusting now even though it's still pretty bad

mahmudulhasanshanLv1

Or are you referring to Mu Bai???? If so than I can't agree with you as Mu Bai and Mu Ning Xue are not related that closely and it's made pretty clear in the story. Calling someone uncle doesn't make you his/her nephew

funmaxwellLv13

umm I may not remember this story very well but I'm pretty sure they were related by blood. as I vaguely remember this story being super trash .

mahmudulhasanshan:Are you referring to Ye Xinxia as his first cousin. IF so than it also made me really disgusted but you conveniently left out the part that they aren't related in any way and she can be called a freeloader. She is not related to him by blood or law.So, I don't think it should be as disgusting now even though it's still pretty bad
funmaxwellLv13

oh yes they actually did make it very clear in the anime that they were related by blood.

mahmudulhasanshan:Are you referring to Ye Xinxia as his first cousin. IF so than it also made me really disgusted but you conveniently left out the part that they aren't related in any way and she can be called a freeloader. She is not related to him by blood or law.So, I don't think it should be as disgusting now even though it's still pretty bad
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Mo_Fan_Magic_GodLv5
KingFischerLv11

For all of these five star reviews on this book, i guess i will have to be the equalizer; i read up to chapter 46 today, and let me tell you; my day was wasted on trash, don't read this book, don't waste your time, there are so many better books on qidian, i don't even understand how this is trending, but i will list a few issues so you can have a general idea of what you're getting into with this. 1. Science and magic is portrayed as complete opposites able to completely replace the other, this boils down to the world he lives in not even having math or physics, just magic. 2. There was mention of a cultivation technique with the old mans necklace ring, which would allow him to save the world, he promptly forgets about it and doesent remember within the next 40 chapters, idk if he ever remembers. Keep in mind that those 40 chapters span a time period of about 2 years. Yup. 3. The author mentions the characters ages etc. But forgets to mention their mental age, which is important because all of them seem about 5-10 years younger mentally than they should be; especially the 16 year olds. 4. The mc tries to lay low by being dismally bad at studying and almost getting expelled if he wasnt actually a crouching tiger hidden dragon, which he is, but hes dismal at that too; as under the examination he is measured to be better than everyone else... how to be low key: 1. Become the trash on the bottom of society, 2. Become the divine leader of the leaderboard within seconds, 3. Do it all in the presence of the whole school to be sure they notice and gossip about it, 4. Piss of the strongest existence in the whole city, because u have beef with him but u still wanna lay low... wait? The magic system is pretty pathetic aswell, though i didn't really see its potential during the 40 chapters, add onto a bunch of inconsistencies, some sexist remarks and an 'in general' scaredycat useless horndog mc what do we got? (btw the whole draw was the idea of a badass mage owning people within his own ranks, but i lost faith pretty quickly as he is basically op by virtue of deus ex machina ,or even worse; op by old man he paid respect to being hidden expert with tons of priceless treasures to help him along. There is no reason to root for him, atleast not as far as i saw, and he definitively isn't even slightly badass.) Apparently a trending story on qidian... what a joke. Lets see qidian delete this review, i'm curious if they actually do. Oh btw i rate it 1 out of 5 stars because i don't think the release rate matters when it comes to quality, in fact it might be in detriment to it. As for the writing quality, i don't only consider grammar, but overall enjoyment of the plot and characters and motivations. Cause the stuff connecting that stuff isnt air, u have to use writing to connect ****, unless you are making an encyclopedia, where its enough to put the information in alphabetical order.

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