webnovel
Daoist_BookSeeking
Daoist_BookSeekingLv57yr
2017-07-05 15:07

If your dream job is to be the fry guy at McDonalds then this novel is for you! Not trying to be too negative but I would like to point out that if your going to write a novel like this then at least teach some real-world values with some realism. Like the translators pointed out, the writer makes tons of plot holes. The quality isn't bad at first but then you get too much unnecessary dialogue later on which makes it boring to read and you guessed it, there isn't much action.

Liked by 14 people

LIKE
Replies15
Darknesssss
DarknesssssLv5

If your dream job is to be the fry guy at McDonalds then this novel is for you! That mean you son!!!!!!!!!!!!! tnx for reading this Novel. Look at you just because you don't like it don't mean other people gona not like it aswell it just a novel to read to pass the time son why you so serz say that ****, it like you just abuse everyone that read this novel son. I'm just say how I feel after i read your comment.

TheOrigin
TheOriginLv10

This lil ****eer basically curse everyone that like this novel. What a baztard type of ppl u re Shame on u

Soul_River
Soul_RiverLv15

This is one of the best novels I have read, so shut up and give us a chance to read it. Plus did you just offend everyone that work at mc Donald's ?

MerlinsRoundTable
MerlinsRoundTableLv6

This reply section sounds like all the side characters after the MC said something arrogant(but true) or something ridiculously humble(that makes everyone seem useless in comparison; like figuring out a peerless technique nobody else can figure out and saying that he only has a ****ty perception).

Master_Tubby
Master_TubbyLv5

So true! Have these people been infected?

MerlinsRoundTable:This reply section sounds like all the side characters after the MC said something arrogant(but true) or something ridiculously humble(that makes everyone seem useless in comparison; like figuring out a peerless technique nobody else can figure out and saying that he only has a ****ty perception).
MerlinsRoundTable
MerlinsRoundTableLv6

This is what happens when you read too much xianxia

Master_Tubby:So true! Have these people been infected?
unhealthyaddiction
unhealthyaddictionLv4

Its like food wars...

crismerin
crismerinLv5

vien

crismerin
crismerinLv5

d

phantombabe
phantombabeLv10

😳What “Real World Value” are you talking about? Do you mean, your Arrogance, Belittling, Bullying, Defaming etc... is this what you call “Real WORLD Value?” Then that would mean the opposite of your Comment “Real World Value” now... isn’t it? Why won’t you try practicing Real World Value first before suggesting one to others. That way your Hypocrisy will cease in an instant and will make you effective as a Human species...yeah?👍🏻 One more thing... Value is a very Broad term and to add World in it, it’s too the extremes. One needs to be succinct, precise, or really specific for one who’s giving an advice.

wizwiz4
wizwiz4Lv4

It's like food wars but lot worse cuz food wars main point was fanservice. This Story doesn't even have that. It's just bland budget food novel. Shitty copy of japanese food novel.

unhealthyaddiction:Its like food wars...
wizwiz4
wizwiz4Lv4

It's like food wars but lot worse cuz food wars main point was fanservice. This Story doesn't even have that. It's just bland budget food novel. Shitty copy of japanese food novel.

unhealthyaddiction:Its like food wars...
wizwiz4
wizwiz4Lv4

Lol this novel is so fucking bland.

phantombabe:😳What “Real World Value” are you talking about? Do you mean, your Arrogance, Belittling, Bullying, Defaming etc... is this what you call “Real WORLD Value?” Then that would mean the opposite of your Comment “Real World Value” now... isn’t it? Why won’t you try practicing Real World Value first before suggesting one to others. That way your Hypocrisy will cease in an instant and will make you effective as a Human species...yeah?👍🏻 One more thing... Value is a very Broad term and to add World in it, it’s too the extremes. One needs to be succinct, precise, or really specific for one who’s giving an advice.
LicoriceBoi
LicoriceBoiLv3

Man all these comments are hilarious, have you never heard of "fantasy" and even if you didn't have you never heard of "comedy"? this is a story made to have a laugh not for the plot, the situations are ridiculous to make the reader smirk not because author is a "retard". So I'll ask you, what "real world values"? Who the **** cares? Are you really reading a comedy + fantasy book to read about a realistic edgy society just so you can say "edgy writing, made me depressed, 10/10 would recommend"? If you do not enjoy a novel then just say so, don't talk crap about the people that do just because you think you're intelligent, superior, or that your own judgment is better than theirs.

LicoriceBoi
LicoriceBoiLv3

I would also like to point out that I only read until chapter 221 so if the novel does become edgy afterward then, yeah. Maybe author boi really is retarded. But you don't seem to have read past chapter 50 so whatever...

Other Reviews
ilsunny
ilsunnyLv6
Related Stories

Limitless The Strongest Revenant

"If you intended to die anyway, don't die quietly like a pussy! Go out in a fucking blaze of glory!" That was the statement that changed my world forever. I was a loser in life. I died and got reincarnated into a Revenant. Revenants were people who defended the living from the dead. In exchange for a second life, they had one task and were blessed with one cheat ability. The task? To kick as much zombie ass as possible. Unfortunately, my cheat just made me "Rewind". It didn't give me super strength, speed or the ability to fly. Hell, it didn't even give me a way to fight! Without any way to kill zombies, I nearly died on my first day on the job! Back then I remember crying and puking all over the place like a little bitch. But while I started out like a little bitch, I didn't stay one. Dying full of regrets changed me you see. So much so that I made a promise. I refused to repeat my mistakes when I was human. Reborn as a Revenant, I will never bow down to anyone ever again. Unfortunately, these Revenant bastards were old school. Like they hacked zombies with swords and all that crap old school. As a man born in the USA, I saw no reason why I needed to follow their outdated way of thinking. The modern world had the superpower of gun powder and lead. So instead of swords, I came after every zombie I saw with guns. Like countries in the middle east, I proceeded to blow the motherfuckers to kingdom come. And surprisingly because of "Rewind", I found out I could never run out of ammunition. $200 for each kill. Hefty bonus for each area of hell liberated. What scared normal people shitless suddenly allowed me to earn millions every day. The richer I got the more "Freedom" I could unleash! Mortars, tanks, air strikes to even nukes. Backed by modern science and technology, I slowly but surely drove the undead back. Along the way, I met and saved seven heavenly beauties. And all of them fell in love with me. They were a little obsessive, scratch that, they were all fucking insane. My precious harem was comprised of nothing but Yanderes in every sense of the word. Still, I would willingly burn the entire world for any of them. For when I called, only my battle harem answered. And that was even before I learned of another secret. Exchanging bodily fluids with my girls gave me their cheats. Suddenly, in contrast to every Revenant in the world who only had one, I alone wielded eight. One from each girl plus my own. And so unfolded my 2nd life. Which eventually became my legend. Who am I you ask? I was born as John Smith. But these days not even my girls use that name. Both on Earth and in Hell everyone else just calls me Limitless. And I am the Strongest Revenant. *************************** Author Notes: Harem size: 7 | No NTR | No Yuri | No Grape Novel Focus: Action, Adventure, Urban Fantasy, Reincarnation, Dark, Weak to Strong, Battle Harem, Beautiful Heroines, YANDERE Heroine, Military, Loyal Subordinates, Kingdom Building, War, Politics, Conspiracies, Overpowered, Face Slapping, Tragedy, Character Development, Multiple POVs, Betrayal, Alternate Realities, Demons, Zombies, Superpowers, Tower Climbing, Tower Defense, Wish fulfillment. I have paid for and own the copyrights to both the cover and character images. Official Discord link https://discord.gg/7yxSzd3szy, See you there!

Yinghuo_392 · Urban
4.3
910 Chs