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Anon
AnonLv17yr
2017-05-19 12:32

Decent novel. Though I am very unsatisfied with the translators... If you don't want to translate something because it may be too 'mature' then either pick a different novel to translate, or don't translate at all. i.e. You took liberties with chapter 18, and didn't translate large portions of it. You edited in your own words to make it flow better since so much was removed... I mean really?? That's like defacing the original author's work, because you don't agree, or are too childish when it came to translating the 'sexual' portions of his book. Is this the only instance where you edited the original writing? Can I still trust reading whatever you translate? Or do I need to go and read the raws? Very disappointed. Please get your act together.

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WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIALModerator

Not translators issue. Author changed the raws and remove the mature part.

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mmcan
mmcanLv1

Oh, so that's the reason behind the change. I apologize for blaming you guys, sorry. If things like this happened, can you add it to the summary as a notice to prevent similar misunderstanding from happening again?

WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL:Not translators issue. Author changed the raws and remove the mature part.
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WEBNOVEL_OFFICIALModerator

Yeah, thats why we have comments feature now haha

mmcan:Oh, so that's the reason behind the change. I apologize for blaming you guys, sorry. If things like this happened, can you add it to the summary as a notice to prevent similar misunderstanding from happening again?
mmcan
mmcanLv1

:)

WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL:Yeah, thats why we have comments feature now haha
Greedy_FreeReader
Greedy_FreeReaderLv3

what are you talkin about?s fine the way it is, even with the omission , if you want to read erotic s*x scenes just search online there are a lot of erotic site out there, its even more explicit. why complain here.

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krios
kriosLv2

hi, is there a way to find old raws ?

WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL:Not translators issue. Author changed the raws and remove the mature part.
Earthshaker34
Earthshaker34Lv6

it's that while there are s*x scenes and they are cut off and there is only one word about it,it leaves bad taste like how arifureta cuts it off when 40% of novel is about harem and s*x .. but i like martial world cause it doesnt cut it off author just says it without a care

Greedy_FreeReader:what are you talkin about?s fine the way it is, even with the omission , if you want to read erotic s*x scenes just search online there are a lot of erotic site out there, its even more explicit. why complain here.
amaminb
amaminbLv4

Thank you for the heads up.it's a disgrace to a translation site to censored part of a novel just because what ever reason. Would it still be authentic? What if the censored part is the writer trademark? As a writer myself, if my baby treated this way. It should stay untranslated.

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debol424
debol424Lv4

I will take note while reading it, so I see first hand what is wrong.

debol424
debol424Lv4

I will take note while reading it, so I see first hand what is wrong.

debol424
debol424Lv4

I will take note while reading it, so I see first hand what is wrong.

debol424
debol424Lv4

I will take note while reading it, so I see first hand what is wrong.

debol424
debol424Lv4

I will take note while reading it, so I see first hand what is wrong.

debol424
debol424Lv4

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debol424
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debol424
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debol424
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I will take note while reading it, so I see first hand what is wrong. ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

debol424
debol424Lv4

I will take note while reading it, so I see first hand what is wrong. ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

debol424
debol424Lv4

I will take note while reading it, so I see first hand what is wrong.

SuperCritic
SuperCriticLv4

Is this account official or not ???

WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL:Yeah, thats why we have comments feature now haha
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