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QuasWexExort
QuasWexExortLv56yr
2018-05-08 05:14

Typical power fantasy, won't waste words here. It's entertaining enough if you're into that kind of stuff. However the lack of editing is very apparent. There are so many instances of missing words, wrong character or item names or incorrect pronouns. I could go on. That is not acceptable in my opinion.

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GoldenFateCoin
GoldenFateCoinLv4

"typical" lol, ok

Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv14

The thing annoying me the most atm is how he spoils them. It's like his sect is nothing, it's just the 4 disciples that he gives everything to. I mean there is absolutely no discipline shown anywhere, they can massacre a city and mc will just laugh, praise them and give them more gifts. Another thing is at times I get completely lost by what's going on because of the jumps. Missing out key info etc gets hard to follow. The ages of everything is also fcked up. At times there at 11 then 13 then 20 then back to 11. It's so fcking confusing...

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