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In2Depression
In2DepressionLv17yr
2017-07-12 13:10

At first glance, it seems like an original novel, written by an English-speaking person. It has the same styles a lot of English sci-fi novels have and some more. But then, you see the character introductions and you're like, "Oh wait, this is a Chinese novels!" That's how I felt at least. Stuff is happening kinda fast currently within the story but it's still just barely keeping at an alright pace for these kinds of novels. It's pretty decent so far but this is only based on the first few chapters so I might change my opinion later on. So...I guess we just have to wait and see as the plot develops. 😀

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mrtylr
mrtylrLv4

I'll give it a shot

DarioHenrique
DarioHenriqueLv13

I'll give it a shot

mt805
mt805Lv13

was it worth reading?

TheSlothLord
TheSlothLordLv15

I'd say yes, if you're used to reading Chinese novels, then this is a more futuristic take on it.

mt805:was it worth reading?
maxmc
maxmcLv4

Its barely passable.

VenerableAnnLust
VenerableAnnLustLv6

Want futuristic? Forty Millenniums of Cultivation is for u😂

TheSlothLord:I'd say yes, if you're used to reading Chinese novels, then this is a more futuristic take on it.
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Xp

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Relhak
RelhakLv12

Okay - so how do I say this nicely? This story sucks. Don't take me wrong - I mean, it's a good story with okay characters, but MAAAN, there's a LOT of inconsistencies and plot holes. I mean really - a ton of stuff where the author just changes tune on a whim. Just to give you a few examples; Early on in the story, the MC has a crush on the principal, and then suddenly the author mentions that the MC will take the principal on a date, but without the dialogue ever having taken place. Yes, this is just a benign example, but it gets worse later on, for example, in the latter end of the story, the author does away with the cultivation scheme that the reader is used to and suddenly introduces "levels". In my opinion, the author is a classic example of not having a clear structure of their world, history, and the characters in it. You will often find contradictory statements in chapter to chapter - and this is just one of many problems with the story. To be nice, the author does have nice character development and relationships. The MC doesn't just fall for the main love interest straight away but falls the friend, and through loss and hardships, realizes his feelings for the main girl - really nice, which is something that many other Chinese novels fail in. But this doesn't make up for what should be the concrete fundamentals of every story - CONSISTENCY! This story will definitely offer you a fresh take on a MC which isn't completely ignorant of his feeling. No face slapping or arrogant young masters at every turn with okay story progression. If you get hung up on details such as plot details and the author contradicting himself, then you should stay FAR away. Overall, I read up to chapter 500+ before skimming the rest of the chapters due to getting fed up with these points. The story end nice, however, as much as this story may portray itself as a single love interest, in the last 50 chapters, the MC suddenly gets himself a harem - also one of the things which will throw off a lot of its ******** readers. Final statement; it really feels like a story written by 2 or 3 different authors, with too many different cultivation methods, contradictory statements and views, vague/confusing races (e.g. Ivantians - which are apparently people who live on the Moon, and Kaedians (which I still don't who are or where they came from)). So yea, although, I'm generally forgiving in nature, this story just felt like a downright mess. It entertained me the first 100 chapters, but after that, I slowly got more and more fed up with it.

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