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Geraldrold
GeraldroldLv136yr
2018-11-05 22:37

I started reading this because it wasnt premium now 120 chapters in i have to pay gg well played. πŸ˜πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘

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Genist
GenistLv4

same, not even late in the novel, straight up 22% in & it turns pay2read

Dragonleader105
Dragonleader105Lv11

i was at 275 and left it because it started pissing me off and when i had almost nothing else to read i wrnt to look at it again and found out i couldnt read any more

OriginDao
OriginDaoLv10

This wasn’t premium in the past. I wanted to reread it but when I went back I found that I have to pay for chapters I’ve already read.

otakulife
otakulifeLv5

you know you can read on a different website, once i get to the pay to read part, i just google it online and read on different website xD

Dragonleader105
Dragonleader105Lv11

i cant find any that have 274 to 513

otakulife:you know you can read on a different website, once i get to the pay to read part, i just google it online and read on different website xD
otakulife
otakulifeLv5

https://m.**********.co/Tempest-of-the-Battlefield/

SilentMild
SilentMildLv6

webnovel.com/book/12961364405159105/The-Legendary-Demon-Hunter Hi Geraldrold, hoping to catch your attention. Pls try checking out my work-in-progress novel - THE LEGENDARY DEMON HUNTER. Currently, it has 8 chapters , pls be the first one to comment and share your suggestions for improvements. Lovelots and happy hunting! ==Respect to the translator/author of this novel, pls forgive me for using this chapter to promote my work, if you find it inappropriate pls call me out and i'll delete it asap.In the same way, do not hesitate to promote your work in the comment's section of my work- xoxo==

LazyFujoshi
LazyFujoshiLv6

LOL, you really advertise a pirate link on a Webnovel LN!!!! Not afraid of anything? Did they do something to you ?

otakulife:https://m.**********.co/Tempest-of-the-Battlefield/
Marwo
MarwoLv5

Looks like he got banned. His last post is that link 🀣

LazyFujoshi:LOL, you really advertise a pirate link on a Webnovel LN!!!! Not afraid of anything? Did they do something to you ?
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Relhak
RelhakLv12

Okay - so how do I say this nicely? This story sucks. Don't take me wrong - I mean, it's a good story with okay characters, but MAAAN, there's a LOT of inconsistencies and plot holes. I mean really - a ton of stuff where the author just changes tune on a whim. Just to give you a few examples; Early on in the story, the MC has a crush on the principal, and then suddenly the author mentions that the MC will take the principal on a date, but without the dialogue ever having taken place. Yes, this is just a benign example, but it gets worse later on, for example, in the latter end of the story, the author does away with the cultivation scheme that the reader is used to and suddenly introduces "levels". In my opinion, the author is a classic example of not having a clear structure of their world, history, and the characters in it. You will often find contradictory statements in chapter to chapter - and this is just one of many problems with the story. To be nice, the author does have nice character development and relationships. The MC doesn't just fall for the main love interest straight away but falls the friend, and through loss and hardships, realizes his feelings for the main girl - really nice, which is something that many other Chinese novels fail in. But this doesn't make up for what should be the concrete fundamentals of every story - CONSISTENCY! This story will definitely offer you a fresh take on a MC which isn't completely ignorant of his feeling. No face slapping or arrogant young masters at every turn with okay story progression. If you get hung up on details such as plot details and the author contradicting himself, then you should stay FAR away. Overall, I read up to chapter 500+ before skimming the rest of the chapters due to getting fed up with these points. The story end nice, however, as much as this story may portray itself as a single love interest, in the last 50 chapters, the MC suddenly gets himself a harem - also one of the things which will throw off a lot of its ******** readers. Final statement; it really feels like a story written by 2 or 3 different authors, with too many different cultivation methods, contradictory statements and views, vague/confusing races (e.g. Ivantians - which are apparently people who live on the Moon, and Kaedians (which I still don't who are or where they came from)). So yea, although, I'm generally forgiving in nature, this story just felt like a downright mess. It entertained me the first 100 chapters, but after that, I slowly got more and more fed up with it.

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