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Nawaabzadah
NawaabzadahLv56yr
2018-11-26 08:53

This is totally a bland story without even containing a little bit of comedy and romance. It has no originality of its own. There's no color in this story. Simple MC levels up kill mobs converts gold to real currency and then level up and this **** goes on and on. I fucking can't simply understand author's line of thought. He tries to make MC keep his identity hidden but at the same time he makes him a top player. He wants to earn as much as possible given the opportunity but at the same time he rejects all the offers to earn big. He gave MC 2nd chance(reincarnation) too early(three years) to do any good **** and then made him choose a ****ty progression class "Thief". Author contradicts himself too much. He forgets things. His naming sense sucks which destroys the mood of a readers immediately. He forgets what **** he has written. I'm too disappointed in this story. Moonlight sculpture is way better than compared to this ****ty story. Well there are lot of things I wanna know and criticize about but I have become too numb to ask or comment on anything written by all the authors who only know to write dumb things.

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Forsaken1
Forsaken1Lv11

you read 300 chapters, it seems odd to give it a 1 star rating at least a two...

ThrustThunder
ThrustThunderLv6

You've pretty much summed up the problem with all "Reincarnated to play a Vidya game" Novels out there. Author inexperience coupled with a dumb 'Smart' MC makes most possible plot lines improbable at best and inconsistent, super cringey Mary-Sue fests at their worst. Look at other ripoff Novels like RotSSG and you'll see just how bad a Franchise can turn when the Author cares less about established plot lines and World Lore then making his weekly word count.

Nawaabzadah
NawaabzadahLv5

Well I have read all the released chapters and I will still give 1 🌟

Forsaken1:you read 300 chapters, it seems odd to give it a 1 star rating at least a two...
Ladymisty20
Ladymisty20Lv4

Bro Moonlight sculpture is epic level novel MMO: Pierce Heaven Til’ It Breaks is better than this

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Kajetan
KajetanLv4

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