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Dethati
DethatiLv117yr
2017-08-08 12:02

This is a VRMMORPG story that is dragged down by the unimaginative and blatant copying of Warcraft lore. The story has ripped out (Illidan, Elune, Malfurion, Aegwynn, Medivh, Cenarius, Ashenvale and more) so many pieces of Warcraft lore that the story comes across as a VRMMO fanfic rather than an actual novel. Characters seem 2 dimensional with little growth or change as of chapter 167. As much as I enjoy this story the blatant copying and misinterpretation of the lore which it is copying distracts from most of the enjoyment I get out of this novel. The world building credit shouldn't go to the author for he never built the world he just stole Warcraft's.

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Dethati
DethatiLv11

If you think this story is amazing, I recommend you check out The King's Avatar here on Qidan as well as rebirth of thief on Wuxiaworld. They make this story seem stale and rather depressing in quality.

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Auras
AurasLv10

Very genric lightnovel

Dethati
DethatiLv11

Yep, extremely generic to the point that it is bland.

Zian24
Zian24Lv5

yeah pretty much a generic webnovel.

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Kajetan
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