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nirleka
nirlekaLv137yr
2018-01-06 09:15

At first i really like how the story start and how the protagonist teach his students. The face slapping also really funny. But, the charm is disappeared after hundred of chapters. The story is so repetitive and bad that i drop it. The story always using same formula in every arc. He come to some guild or school, get bullied, using plot armor to solve his inadequacy, help important people, face slapping everyone, rinse and repeat. After get famous in that place or school we will get clue that the level of the place or the school is not that great and the protagonist need to go to much higher level kingdom or placs. Sadly, The story is only boil down to that formula. Moreover, the characters development is really lacking and only superficial. They only boil down to increase cultivation level and get charmed by main protagonist cheats. There is no gradual or proper characters development. The characters emotion only revolve in envy, jelousy, agitation, and shame for antagonist. On the other hand, the students always underestimate the main protagonist, after that get help by main protagonist cheats, and they get charmed and reverenced. The timeline also ridiculous, in 300 chapters we get 1,5 month of the main character life. Every day he will go to someplace and face slapping every people using his cheats. But he always think, i need to hide my cheats. There is no romance in the story. What we get is always typical beautiful famous xianxia women. She will underestimate mc, get face slapped, change of heart, and get forgotten when the mc go to other kingdoms or places. When he arrives at new place, there will be new woman with same characters but only higher background. There is lots of major sort comming of the story but you get the basic idea. Typical power leveling xianxia with blantlant plot armor to solve main character predicament. Mix it with bland antagonists and side characters. I really can't fathom why this story is the first rank in the qidian power ranking.

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Cadis_Di_Raizel
Cadis_Di_RaizelLv5

Agree

s666teven
s666tevenLv5

agree

vat
vatLv6

Totally agree

Randomleech
RandomleechLv4

While what you said is true, it isn't wholly true either: To me, this novel is about 2 things: face-slapping and... No just face slapping. The author simply looks for the next face-slapping opportunity, and goes straight to it, using a little world building to disguise it as more than a series of cliched xianxia jokes. That said, the romance thing is starting to appear, with that "mysterious beauty" who got him to Consonant Spirit Realm pinnacle out of nowhere, and disappeared right after like... a xianxia protagonist. And the antagonists are starting to go from jealous (master) teachers whom the mc destroys in one move then converts to the "cult of MC" to EVUL DEMONS he can kill without remorse... But at least the difficulty level increases, so the bull**** keeps escalating to compensate...

Chinese_Tony
Chinese_TonyLv2

It is true! There are so many book like this no matter here or Chinese version. At the beginning it is interesting and novel, but it soon be boring. So many books both have the same formula. In China, it was more serious. I am can't bear this so i go there to find other books, but it is boring, too! The same formula again and again. Oh, may God bless me to find a interesting books!!!

Roktah
RoktahLv15

this was my favorite novel in the beginning but that soon changed. i dropped it when he wanted to go to xuanyuan country or whatever it was called for guild smashing and decided to lvl up his flying beast to zhizun realm, guess what he did "ping ping ping... beast reached zhizun realm. utterly boring and underserving of first rank in popularity,in my oppinion its on of hte worst novels on this site. there are some original novels far superior to this.

Mokindee
MokindeeLv4

Agree

sgogeta4
sgogeta4Lv10

Disagree

isyaku0102
isyaku0102Lv2

Good

Lion_stylo
Lion_styloLv6

He actually got a wifey. Quite a nice romance btw. It gets better later on

nirleka
nirlekaLv13

At what chapter? Maybe i will re-read it when i have montly subscription πŸ€”

Lion_stylo:He actually got a wifey. Quite a nice romance btw. It gets better later on
Lion_stylo
Lion_styloLv6

Well it was something progressive but the rinse and repeat ended after chapter 600 or so. Or at least slowed down (it's like author accepted the critisism) and when he leveled up to a new kingdom the past kingdom was still relevant, so we're past storylines. At the begining mc was basically unbeatable but one he got a few ranks up the library became less and less it is still op, just more balanced. I recommend you read it off-site of you know what I mean if you don't have the subscription. That novel is a black holes if you use stones. Frikin 13 per chapter

nirleka:At what chapter? Maybe i will re-read it when i have montly subscription πŸ€”
ublu
ubluLv10

fudgyf gdfy

bettybae7
bettybae7Lv3

Lol

Saberswordguy
SaberswordguyLv13

I'm in chapter 871 the rinse and repeat is for real still happening no signs of slowing down that much to my senses pretty much just faceslapping and he is now the principal of the school In the chapter I'm on he goes to faceslap the king it is not stopping some signs of romance not really he meets a girl same age as him talented also sorta underestimate him it really in my perspective didn't slow down at all

Lion_stylo:Well it was something progressive but the rinse and repeat ended after chapter 600 or so. Or at least slowed down (it's like author accepted the critisism) and when he leveled up to a new kingdom the past kingdom was still relevant, so we're past storylines. At the begining mc was basically unbeatable but one he got a few ranks up the library became less and less it is still op, just more balanced. I recommend you read it off-site of you know what I mean if you don't have the subscription. That novel is a black holes if you use stones. Frikin 13 per chapter
Saberswordguy
SaberswordguyLv13

I'm in chapter 871 the rinse and repeat is for real still happening no signs of slowing down that much to my senses pretty much just faceslapping and he is now the principal of the school In the chapter I'm on he goes to faceslap the king it is not stopping some signs of romance not really he meets a girl same age as him talented also sorta underestimate him it really in my perspective didn't slow down at all

Lion_stylo:Well it was something progressive but the rinse and repeat ended after chapter 600 or so. Or at least slowed down (it's like author accepted the critisism) and when he leveled up to a new kingdom the past kingdom was still relevant, so we're past storylines. At the begining mc was basically unbeatable but one he got a few ranks up the library became less and less it is still op, just more balanced. I recommend you read it off-site of you know what I mean if you don't have the subscription. That novel is a black holes if you use stones. Frikin 13 per chapter
WhyTee
WhyTeeLv5

last chapter. and got her for nothing

nirleka:At what chapter? Maybe i will re-read it when i have montly subscription πŸ€”
Zen_Henituse
Zen_HenituseLv13

Lord of the mysteries should take No.1 placeπŸ™.

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Hevveh
HevvehLv1

I honestly think that this is one of the best stories I've read so far, and I've read a lot. Everything about is well-thought and unique, (little to no tropes) and it never felt dull and it was all fleshed out. This has been a popular story for a while. So I recommend and suggest you read this story, here's why: Translation Quality: The translations are great, (as expected from Qidian) and the story makes me laugh as the protagonist smacks the faces of people who underestimated him, I've seen little to no errors at all concerning grammar or punctuation and it makes it easy for you to understand what's happening. Updating Stability/Speed: It ticks me off since this story is one of the best I've read so far, I constantly wait and there are many other people like me out there. 1 chapter everyday for 5 days in a week isn't enough, taking into account the quality of this story and how brilliant it is. Thought the updating speed isn't good for those impatient, the stability is true to it's word. They always update every day which is enough for me. World Building: It slowly builds up and doesn't just throw a bunch of information at you expecting to have to have powers like the main character here (unless you do). The build up of the world is decent but it just doesn't explain enough really about the roles and the other places other than where the main character is. It just gives you the information you need where you are. Character Design: The characters are well-fleshed out and their are no characters being introduced that are basically just 2-D with no personality. They all have a role and even if they play a minor one they are mentioned a few more times later on in the story. The characters develop throughout the story and don't just have the same personality. Story Development: The plot of the story is very interesting as it is, I've read many online and translated novels and this barely follows any tropes, (you can't expect there to be none with so many stories). It also goes at a decent pacing that is persistent, (he doesn't just rise 4 realms in 1 go). You can expect the plot to be great as it's very unique, I was always wanting more and it never felt dull. You can expect the story to be brilliant and splendid, you will always be on the edge of your seat! I rate this 4.6 stars!

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