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ZaelumLv51mth
2025-01-22 22:34

This's good! Have a lot of potential, and remember to not make him OP, the idea of this system is to travel and increase the amount of time spent with the other waifus so to get them know each others and stuff like that. Just focusing on the system and the MC is a quick way to kill the fanfic. But the current pace is quite good, I like it a lot.

HP - I Got My Sacred Gear... and It Manifested as a Chat Group!?

OneTrueSage
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23 Chs

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ANY1977Lv4

the pleasure you get when you see the mc getting better, thinking outside the box, grinding, etc. snuffs out when he can wave a finger and fixes everything

1mth
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DagonoidLv2

I really liked the story and it's good that you didn't make him seem like someone else out of nowhere when receiving his memories, I always found that strange in other reincarnation fics

1mth
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Perses130Lv4

Could you consider adding Merlin from seven deadly sins 🙏🙏🙏pls She gets no love.

1mth
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DARK_REY_ZEROLv2

Reveal spoiler

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RustyBoiLv4

Has potential, but characters’ interactions are somewhat artificial and contrary to how they’d act, especially with the information they got exposed to

1mth
7
urdaa22Lv1

Genial................................................................................................................................................................. 👍🏽

1mth
4
PrinceOfNothingLv4

So far, so good. Are you going to make him a devil?

1mth
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Manny_DourietLv3

Pretty good story so far and I'm rather liking the mc grey alignment since for most the world is never black and white unless you're practically a dumb hero or a villain whose evil just because. With the grey line it's like a game of jump rope someday your lighter gray and other's your dark grey.

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fiction_writerLv2

Very good story with good mc and charectors who doesn't feel they are bots. The multiverse chat group troupe and travelling to other world troupe is done very nicely without making it feel like it's some other wish fulfilment fic. HxH arc is incredibly fun and I am hoping to continue this and bring more Worlds. Pls don't drop this

1mth
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25thgodLv1

so far so good, keep up the good work, thanks for not making him having an over the top lineage, i like the gerne but it get dull sometime.

1mth
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