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Nova255
Nova255Lv13mth
2024-12-29 10:48

Author if you gonna delete this review i hope you read it and then deleted. this review is for you any way i am 100% sure that this novel will dropped for a lot of reasons but i only gonna talk about one 1 - a lot of OC. ask any fan-fic reader if you wanna read hundreds of chapters of OC characters no one give a shit about and you will see the answers. but the major flaw is the OC will be in the harem and the MC well spend a lot of time interact with them and again most readers don't care about OC in overlord fan-fic.. and worse than that the other main character of overlord will have less screen time and just like that you killed what make overlord a fan-fic. it's called fanfic for a reason you know not to add new characters but to see different paths in the story we already know PS the OC Design are top notch but not in fan fic

Overlord Ashes of Yggdrasil

HRN_Dreadnought
4.5
34 Chs

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Nova255
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when and where did i say i don't like harem or the harem comes off weird? all i said is i don't like OC characters (OC=original character that the author add it to the fanfic) i don't like OC characters because they steal all the screen time of the story. next time try to read at least one paragraph of my comment you look like clown jumping to conclusion based on your paranoid mind

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Ciel_Best_Waifu
Ciel_Best_WaifuLv14

That's actually something I wanted to ask. I normally like OC characters in a fanfic but only if they have their own story arc and are not just saying every line the MC was going to say in the original. Is this going to be the case here or am I just going to read copy paste on a different character?🤔

Nova255:when and where did i say i don't like harem or the harem comes off weird? all i said is i don't like OC characters (OC=original character that the author add it to the fanfic) i don't like OC characters because they steal all the screen time of the story. next time try to read at least one paragraph of my comment you look like clown jumping to conclusion based on your paranoid mind
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